Pond Life At Sunset

Another day’s daylight is fading,
and the evening sunset is red;
in the pond at the end of the garden,
mating calls are starting to spread.

There’s a chorus of croaking and growling
from the suitors attracting a mate. 
The pond is a constant of ripples,
that dueling does tend to create.

Green heads are held out of water;
throats bubble on a lily pad,
but while attention’s diverted, 
a visitor appears mighty glad.

Among sedges, grasses and bulrush,
a fork tongue is flicking for heat,
where all that he senses is dinner,
and frogs make a wonderful treat.

The spikes on the sedges are beds,
for the night of the dragonfly,
and a blue heron finishes feeding,
for the branch of a gum tree up high. 

Pigmy Perch are quite relieved,
for they are the predators now,
mosquito wrigglers are lessened,
but many do survive somehow.

The pond is a home for so many,
but balance is struck keenly fine,
between plants, predators, and prey, 
with the need for them all to combine.

Another day’s daylight is fading,
and the evening sunset is red;
shadow quickly covers the land,
and stars put the pond life to bed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Canerdy Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 8:23 PM
This is a very appealing--and educational foray into nature--very well-written, Lindsay. Janice
Laurie Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Thank you Janice for your kind comment - I'm pleased you enjoyed my little observation - Lindsay
Proxenos Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 2:58 PM
What a beautiful poem Lindsay. If insects, frogs dragon flies, birds, snakes as well as the plant life you have mentioned, can all keep an even balance, why can't we humans learn from them and try to balance our ever fading planet earth? Great write lindsay. Best wishes , Jennifer.
Laurie Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:37 PM
A simple reason Jennifer - humans are greedy and exploiters believing everything on earth is provided for them, although not all humans do - thank you once again Jennifer - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 9:21 PM
very descriptive of pond life, Lindsay. You brought it to life for us!
Laurie Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:34 PM
Hello Andrea … I always appreciate a comment from you - thanks for dropping by - Lindsay
Flood Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 8:06 PM
Love this Lindsay... but was it strictly nessesary for even one mosquito larvae to survive? Oh well, they say he works in mysterious ways, suppose they must be for something. Seriously... good job.
Laurie Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:32 PM
Hi there Terry … I'm with you on the mozzie front, and I blame the pigmy perch for not doing their job - thanks for reading and commenting Terry - Lindsay
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November 30, 2018 at 6:51 PM
Oh my Lindsay.! you transported me back to the farm in my teenage years when I spent so much time at our frog pond. Wow. Lots and lots of memories there. Your description is meticulous and enthralling. Thanks for your comment
Laurie Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:30 PM
Hello Robert … I was hoping that readers could relate to those warm balmy nights with natures chorus joining in with family conversation - thanks for reading Robert - Lindsay
Green Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 7:49 AM
This was beautiful and I can so relate to this Lindsay. I love to hear the frogs singing at night and how nature creates it's own music to share with everyone. I have a pond on my property and I often just sit there and listen quietly. Your poem takes me there. Oh, the mosquitoes...well, not everything is perfect. : )
Laurie Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Thanks for your positive comment Chris. Yes, just one little feaster can drive you near insane with that constant whining - catch you soon Chris - Lindsay
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November 26, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Proving Aussies count anything but sheep! Aloha! Rico
Laurie Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:21 PM
G'day Rico … sheep are okay Rico, it appears so far this summer snake numbers, especially in towns have risen steeply by an early count - catch you Rico - Lindsay
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November 26, 2018 at 7:28 PM
I closed my eyes and was there! Great Poem
Laurie Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:18 PM
I'm sure you have your little piece of paradise close by Timothy - thanks Mate - Lindsay
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November 26, 2018 at 6:38 PM
What a beauty, Lindsay! Your write really captures the setting of the sun. Another masterpiece from the Master of Verse. Take care, old mate! Bob
Laurie Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Thanks for your comment Bob - nature at dusk is such a calming effect - catch you soon - Lindsay
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