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Pon the Rose Trellis

'pon the rose trellis  
last pale pink rose of summer..
roses' nectar kiss

from lips of lover
rose flavored kisses what bliss..
ummmm ahhh rose kisses 

Written this day:November 11, 2012
Written by: Sara Kendrick

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Seren Roberts

November 15, 2012 at 2:19 PM

Congratulations Sara .......Seren

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 15, 2012 at 6:56 AM

Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

November 13, 2012 at 8:53 PM

ummmm ahhh!!! How cute! Congratulations on your well deserved win, dear Sara! Love, Hanitra

Len Gasun

November 13, 2012 at 8:23 PM

Congratulations on your awesome win my dear Sara. Roses are beautiful and so your poem! I love it! Cheers! love/hugs, LG

Andrea Dietrich

November 13, 2012 at 4:49 PM

yes, I knew this would be on the list. Big congrats, sara. you deserved a win

Joseph May

November 13, 2012 at 3:22 PM

wonderful write...congrats on your win Sara

Poet Destroyer A

November 13, 2012 at 1:50 PM

Sara, congratulations with your awesome sexy haiku... :-) pd

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

November 13, 2012 at 8:17 AM

Sweet and lovely. Congrats!! Jag

Kash Poet

November 13, 2012 at 5:51 AM

ummmm ahhh.....Congratulations Sara on your win:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 13, 2012 at 5:43 AM

CONGRATS SARA ON A SULTRY ROSE HAIKU AND A STEAMY WIN TOO LUV ..

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 13, 2012 at 1:30 AM

Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

November 13, 2012 at 1:08 AM

Congratulations Sara xx

Sandy Ivy D

November 12, 2012 at 10:20 PM

Sexy haiku. TY, Sandy'

Jack Horne

November 12, 2012 at 2:43 PM

love this romantic write, my friend

Tim Ryerson

November 12, 2012 at 11:28 AM

Genius link between 1st and 2nd haikus... Me-thinks you have mastered this form rather well...soup mail for Sara! - Tim

Ravindra K Kapoor

November 12, 2012 at 8:30 AM

The beauty of a Yellow Rose always charms me and in this wonderful Haiku you have made it intoxicating by the nectar of beloved's kiss. Great write Sara with stunning beauty of Roses and Roses resembling the softness of lips, which comes from the lovers kiss. Thank you Sara for your kind comments on my series Poem "Tesu" A Folk Love Story” With all good wishes and loves ...Ravindra...Sara K

Russell Sivey

November 11, 2012 at 8:19 PM

You have masterfully crafted a pair of wondrous Haiku here my friend! I really enjoyed reading these two magnificent delights this evening! What a gorgeous piece, Great Work!!