pomegranate

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May-25- 2025

A Fruity Hiku Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

a pomegranate with ruby marbles inside~ sweet n' sour delight

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Joseph May

Date: 6/6/2025 5:20:00 AM

Nicely penned, best wishes

Silent One

Date: 5/25/2025 10:03:00 AM

A very healthy and beneficial fruit.. Your haiku is nicely done and you describe the joy of pomegranate really well...

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/25/2025 10:02:00 AM

What a fun "pomegranate" fruity Hiku write you have here. Great Picture... "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one. Have a fun day writing away..........

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/25/2025 7:46:00 AM

Regret not my favorite fruit. Some say it's a healthy one.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/25/2025 7:01:00 AM

I love pomegranates, and you did a beautiful haiku on the fruit dear sweet valsa! Its also very good for health. Iv missed reading your poems!! I hope you have a wonderful time with your family in pattaya and bangkok! I might be going next month too. Sending you light always! Best wishes also for the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2025 6:20:00 AM

- A fruit we don't have in Norway... but I've tasted them in Turkey... tasty :) - Best wishes, Valsa :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/25/2025 6:15:00 AM

I have a tree (more huge bush) in my backyard, but in Phoenix, very difficult to give it the abundance of water it needs. They are a tasty treat. Well done.