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Polly Wally Doodles: Written With Jan Allison

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Polly Wally waddles all day She's running for office in LA She wastes time doodling Enjoys a daily noodling But she never earns her pay Polly Wally was once quite a looker before politics she worked as a hooker now she dresses with power doesn't get paid by the hour now she's aging no man would book her

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2017 5:54:00 PM

very cute, you two!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/20/2017 6:47:00 PM

Merci!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/17/2017 2:07:00 PM

I needed this laugh from you two. Thanks for the laugh! : )

Lin Lane
Date: 8/17/2017 4:32:00 PM

Then we're happy to have given you reason to laugh. Thanks, Connie.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/17/2017 7:03:00 AM

Ha ha, this one is awesome, Lin and Jan:)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/17/2017 7:13:00 AM

Thanks Jo, and thanks again for naming my two sons. I'll have to try again for a little llama girl.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/16/2017 7:06:00 AM

Poor Polly Wally! A fun read Lin and Jan!!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/16/2017 7:22:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/16/2017 7:01:00 AM

Hi Lin, i always enjoy the limericks you all day. Another excellent limerick by you both. I always enjoy my little piece of fun. I always love the way you can't tell who wrote which one. The piece is seamless. This limerick shall join the rest of my limericks, a definite fave. Wonderful write from you both. Hugs....Mike. XX

Lin Lane
Date: 8/16/2017 7:21:00 AM

Hugging you back for all the great comments, Mike. thanks!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/16/2017 5:59:00 AM

Some real looney birds out in LA... anyone need to borrow some crackers

Lin Lane
Date: 8/16/2017 6:04:00 AM

lol Thanks, Tim. Polly squawks an awful lot, but it's not crackers she wants.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/16/2017 5:59:00 AM

ha ha ha Lin I LOVE the title you gave it - I have another title for mine lol:-) Been an absolute joy writing this with you lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/16/2017 6:03:00 AM

You're always a fun writing partner, Jan. I'm sure your title will be something fittingly awesome.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/16/2017 5:56:00 AM

Ha! This is so awesome! Who wrote which one? I'm not sure who wrote which! I surely loved both of them however, a very good poem about Polly Wally, the poor hooker who is running for office in LA! What a spectacular piece, Great Work both of you!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2017 6:06:00 AM

oh that is a fab idea Lin we could work on a part 2 sometime lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/16/2017 6:02:00 AM

Hi, Russell. We're not going to tell who wrote which...we might even be adding on to it as Polly hits the campaign trail. Thanks for laughing at Polly and leaving us great comments.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2017 6:00:00 AM

oh we will never divulge that it is classified info but what fun we had writing together:-) hugs jan xx