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Polka Dottie When the up-tempo “Beer Barrel Polka” began I grabbed sweet John’s arm, curtsied to my man The Polish side of my family hit the floor While my new groom wished he could slip out the back door There was only one dance I’d ever seen John do His “variation of the twist,” shuffling one shoe In fear he stood at first, wishing he’d taken lessons Then hoped he could fake it, capture polka’s essence But his sister Dottie could see poor John’s distress So she hoisted up the hem of her bridesmaid’s dress My family cleared way as Dottie started to prance Oh, yeah, this gal surely knew how to Polka dance John slipped behind the bar with a bottle of gin As Dot spun me ‘round and my legs did a tailspin So fast we twirled that I quickly became dizzy Barrett fell from my hair and wild hair flew frizzy Now what was I seeing, not one Dot, at least two The Polka Dots took lead and when the dance was through Dot told me she’d done it to rescue her brother Who was now being helped to the loo by his mother Dottie became an honorary “Pole” that night Pleasing me and saving face to my groom’s delight Written January 11, 2019 For Edward Ibeh’s Polka Dots Contest

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Date: 1/23/2019 2:54:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, dear Carolyn ... (it should be higher on the winning list ) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/22/2019 5:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest, Carolyn!:) A wonderfully done poem with amazing imagery!
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Date: 1/17/2019 9:09:00 AM
Carolyn, oh what a delightful write, really sweet, best of luck in the contest ~
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Date: 1/13/2019 7:57:00 PM
This is just so cute and such a breath of fresh air. Love it. A sure winner in the contest. So nicely done, Carolyn. (soupmail)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/13/2019 10:20:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the Soup mail. I hope Dottie isn't visiting the Soup tonight. We've stayed good friends.
Date: 1/12/2019 8:21:00 PM
How was your day? I saw the Beale STreet movie, one that most americans have not seen, but it stands a great chance at an Oscar, in my opinion.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/13/2019 2:16:00 AM
Is it a foreign film? With subtitles? That's okay with me and I've loved some of the foreign films I've seen. Will try to remember the name, but still haven't even seen "Vice."
Date: 1/12/2019 8:20:00 PM
oh wow, Carolyn, you sure did a DANDY for this polka dot contest, playing off the polka dance and a woman's name. VERY creative, and sure to please the sponsor!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/13/2019 2:15:00 AM
Andrea, my sister-in-law Dorothy (aka Dottie) was a tad lit on champagne and did a belly dance while the polka was playing at my wedding. It was better than my husband's "variation of the twist" and my Polish relatives gave her a standing ovation. LOL thanks for reading
Date: 1/12/2019 7:12:00 PM
Hello Carolyn,I got a chuckle from your poetry. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/12/2019 3:17:00 PM
Lol...Rescued from the dance floor by Polka Dottie...Very nicely penned Carolyn..
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Date: 1/12/2019 11:24:00 AM
This flows so well with good rhymes... Made me smile... And excellent entry for the contest Carolyn..
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/12/2019 11:29:00 AM
Thanks, my friend. I'll visit your page now.
Date: 1/12/2019 7:15:00 AM
I can see the scene ..in your beautiful poem..enjoyable read..so well written, Carolyn. Best for a win.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/12/2019 9:27:00 AM
Thanks for reading, Vijay. I'll visit your page.
Date: 1/12/2019 3:28:00 AM
Well written with an excellent story line and humour. Good luck in the contest Tom.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/12/2019 4:59:00 AM
We were all a bit "Dottie" at the wedding. At the end of the night, I found John at a table behind the bar polishing off a bottle of hard liquor. Thanks for reading, Tom.
Date: 1/12/2019 2:21:00 AM
This is my bedtime read, I will go to bed smiling, loved this!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/12/2019 4:56:00 AM
Most of this story is what really happened at our wedding. Only difference is Dorothy (Dot) had taken belly dancing lessons and that's what she did when the Polka music began. Glad I sent you to bed with a smile, Arthur.

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