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Polka Dottie

Polka Dottie

When the up-tempo “Beer Barrel Polka” began
I grabbed sweet John’s arm, curtsied to my man

The Polish side of my family hit the floor
While my new groom wished he could slip out the back door

There was only one dance I’d ever seen John do
His “variation of the twist,” shuffling one shoe

In fear he stood at first, wishing he’d taken lessons
Then hoped he could fake it, capture polka’s essence

But his sister Dottie could see poor John’s distress
So she hoisted up the hem of her bridesmaid’s dress

My family cleared way as Dottie started to prance
Oh, yeah, this gal surely knew how to Polka dance

John slipped behind the bar with a bottle of gin
As Dot spun me ‘round and my legs did a tailspin
	
So fast we twirled that I quickly became dizzy
Barrett fell from my hair and wild hair flew frizzy

Now what was I seeing, not one Dot, at least two
The Polka Dots took lead and when the dance was through

Dot told me she’d done it to rescue her brother
Who was now being helped to the loo by his mother

Dottie became an honorary “Pole” that night
Pleasing me and saving face to my groom’s delight





Written January 11, 2019
For Edward Ibeh’s Polka Dots Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Andresen Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 2:54 AM
- A wonderful poem, dear Carolyn ... (it should be higher on the winning list ) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 5:59 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest, Carolyn!:) A wonderfully done poem with amazing imagery!
La France Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 9:09 AM
Carolyn, oh what a delightful write, really sweet, best of luck in the contest ~
Wolf Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 7:57 PM
This is just so cute and such a breath of fresh air. Love it. A sure winner in the contest. So nicely done, Carolyn. (soupmail)
Devonshire Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 10:20 PM
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the Soup mail. I hope Dottie isn't visiting the Soup tonight. We've stayed good friends.
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 8:21 PM
How was your day? I saw the Beale STreet movie, one that most americans have not seen, but it stands a great chance at an Oscar, in my opinion.
Devonshire Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 2:16 AM
Is it a foreign film? With subtitles? That's okay with me and I've loved some of the foreign films I've seen. Will try to remember the name, but still haven't even seen "Vice."
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 8:20 PM
oh wow, Carolyn, you sure did a DANDY for this polka dot contest, playing off the polka dance and a woman's name. VERY creative, and sure to please the sponsor!
Devonshire Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 2:15 AM
Andrea, my sister-in-law Dorothy (aka Dottie) was a tad lit on champagne and did a belly dance while the polka was playing at my wedding. It was better than my husband's "variation of the twist" and my Polish relatives gave her a standing ovation. LOL thanks for reading
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 7:12 PM
Hello Carolyn,I got a chuckle from your poetry. Have a nice evening my friend.
May Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 3:17 PM
Lol...Rescued from the dance floor by Polka Dottie...Very nicely penned Carolyn..
One Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 11:24 AM
This flows so well with good rhymes... Made me smile... And excellent entry for the contest Carolyn..
Devonshire Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 11:29 AM
Thanks, my friend. I'll visit your page now.
Pandit Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 7:15 AM
I can see the scene ..in your beautiful poem..enjoyable read..so well written, Carolyn. Best for a win.
Devonshire Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 9:27 AM
Thanks for reading, Vijay. I'll visit your page.
Cunningham Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 3:28 AM
Well written with an excellent story line and humour. Good luck in the contest Tom.
Devonshire Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 4:59 AM
We were all a bit "Dottie" at the wedding. At the end of the night, I found John at a table behind the bar polishing off a bottle of hard liquor. Thanks for reading, Tom.
Vaso Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 2:21 AM
This is my bedtime read, I will go to bed smiling, loved this!
Devonshire Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 4:56 AM
Most of this story is what really happened at our wedding. Only difference is Dorothy (Dot) had taken belly dancing lessons and that's what she did when the Polka music began. Glad I sent you to bed with a smile, Arthur.
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