Polka Dot Rainbow

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when sunshine emerged a polka dot rainbow flared above green treetops things were looking up all the colors coming down children chased balloons many-hued nature has unending surprises like diamonds in dirt

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Karen Jones

Date: 10/15/2021 11:37:00 AM

I love the idea of a polka dot rainbow! This poem is optimistic just as children are in the last line! Enjoyed

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/15/2021 12:03:00 PM

I extend my deepest thanks for the complimentary remarks. Enjoy your weekend. :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/13/2021 6:48:00 PM

Love this collection of poetic images in your poem, Evelyn! Very uplifting, too! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/13/2021 8:46:00 PM

Your words mean so much. Thank you. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/12/2021 1:48:00 AM

I'll never be able to write haikus like you do. Splendid.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/12/2021 3:29:00 PM

Thank you for the compliment, Victor.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/12/2021 1:45:00 AM

Love your tri-haiku's Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/12/2021 3:31:00 PM

Thank you, Harry.