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Political World by Dylan's Political World

They say Beyond the suspension bridge Lies paradise But beneath the bridge I see people who fell Even though they walked straight They say A comfortable life awaits across the bridge Yet some are shaking the bridge Making it impossible To believe in eternal safety Among those who attempt to cross None guarantee the bridge's safety And voices indifferent to the happiness Said to be on the other side Are disregarded Why Are they so fixated on the suspension bridge? Why Even though it's just reaching the other shore Do our Feet Tremble?

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Date: 6/19/2025 7:37:00 PM
Very nice entry for my contest and congrats on your placement in my contest
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Shinsaku Ashida
Date: 6/19/2025 10:44:00 PM
Dear Mckeithan, Thank you very much for your kind words and for the honor of being placed in your contest. I'm truly grateful for the opportunity and encouragement. I look forward to reading more of your work and participating in future contests as well. Warm regards, Shinsaku Ashida

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