Politeness But a Moment

  
     Pardon me, pardon you
       Politeness but a moment 
         an achoo

      I forgive you ~
         Creation itself renewed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Flood Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 4:23 PM
I guess I’m just bonkers… but my first read told me that God sneezed and created EVERYTHING! Mind you… I happen to think that that’s actually more likely than a return to civility. For that reason only, I’m sticking with interpretation one… Which is brilliant ;-)
DiMino Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 7:50 AM
Forgiveness is the best beginning. Ourselves and others, often hardest on ourselves.
Swan Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 3:20 AM
a little 'achoo' moment of civility. Nice. J :)
Rolland Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 2:09 AM
nice and subtle, enjoyed
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