Polite Pirates

The captain called all hands on deck
He said come on lads what the heck
Whatever you do
when you have to poo
don’t leave the loo in such a wreck
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M  Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Hehe…that should be hung in every public loo…some are disgusting!! How people get poo on walls is beyond me…!!? Debx
Ashley Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 7:03 PM
Haha! A humorous Limerick, Jerry. Even pirates need to have some consideration. Well done! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Fisher Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 5:37 PM
Good one, Jerry. After a while, I'm sure they'd all have to walk the plank.
Brotherton Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 6:24 PM
Ha, great point my friend. Have a great week, David.
Baker Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 4:11 PM
Good advice and well-written to form, my friend. Write On! Bill
Brotherton Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 6:23 PM
It seemed like it has been a limerick kind of week for everyone, so I thought I'd give it a try.
One Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 12:10 PM
Ha! I think this probably the case in many a ship full of males..
Brotherton Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 6:21 PM
Not to mention, where was the toilet paper.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:54 AM
I suppose sailors do not have proper toilets.
Brotherton Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 6:20 PM
Can't always just go over the rail you know.
Jones Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 1:59 AM
lol good one Jerry!
Brotherton Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 6:19 PM
Thanks, Karen. Hopefully, I gave you a chuckle. Have a great evening, my friend.
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