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while the room spins around
dreams and wishes swoosh
in tandem in a mega swirl
one look and delirious delight
releases chaotic madness
a sea of sensations in motion
a swarm of tangents and explosives
perhaps concealed under bated breath
but the eyes never lie ~



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Date: 9/24/2024 8:31:00 PM
Truly, 'the eyes have it!' All revealed.
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Date: 9/28/2024 3:44:00 AM
indeed ~ thanks, Gershon

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