Poisons and Venoms

On our globe of life
Animal and plant
Protection for them
To us they grant
 
Venom's and poisons
To defend and deter
Whether scaled
Leafed or fur
 
Reactions can be
Ultimate and pain
As each delivers
To protect their name
 
The slow loris
Amazes us all
Poison and venom
In something so small
 
Bee's, nettles
Stingrays tail
Deterrents to us
Only humans assail
 
Incredible weapons
Gifted to them
Imagine if they 
Were in the hands of men
 
Would we use them
For the human race
Or against each other
Once again lose face
 
On the leaf of the nettle
And the body of the bee
To the tail on the stingray
Is where they'll always be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 4:49 AM
Hi James, I didn't want this week to pass without congratulating you on having your well-written venomous poem featured this week. It was an enjoyable to read. I've enjoyed reading it now and then... Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane
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January 27, 2010 at 6:34 AM
This here was a nice little ditty... Your rhyme is crisp and on point.... Wonderful, and well worth the feature.....:JP]
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January 27, 2010 at 4:01 AM
Congratulations James, on having your insightful poem featured this week. It was an enjoyable to read. Note: Stinging nettle is a good guard plant .. (don't give up the dog, though lol) for under windows... if you live in the woods and it's a native flower... This was fun! Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane
Freeman Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 7:12 PM
First-rate feature James. Congratulations, Sincerely, Moses
Fisher Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 11:10 AM
James - another well deserve feature. Many congrats rgds Janette
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January 25, 2010 at 8:47 AM
A wonderful poem to be chosen for the featured page, James. Love this! Congratulations...well deserved! ~ Carrie
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January 25, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week James Rgds Brian
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January 24, 2010 at 9:23 PM
Congrats to the Highlander on your featured poem this week on the Soup... excellent choice.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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January 24, 2010 at 4:50 PM
congrats on the featured poem, good one!!
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January 24, 2010 at 2:59 PM
Much for the reader to think about in this poem. Nice use of rhyme. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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January 24, 2010 at 1:38 PM
Congratulations are your well deserved featured poem this week James. Love, Carol
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October 2, 2009 at 11:59 AM
James, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 26, 2009 at 9:25 AM
There is much wisdom in your beautifully penned words, James. Yes, God knew what he has doing. With uman nature being what it is, many would choose to use these means of protection and survival for offense. Another well deserving piece going on to the finals! Love and best wishes always, Robin
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September 25, 2009 at 4:33 PM
Another poem in the finals. Wow! Again, congratulations. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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September 25, 2009 at 11:22 AM
Nature certainly does enjoy her defense mechanisms, humans certainly enjoy mimicking nature. But we don't defend huh, only attack. a detachable bee stinger made of metal and fueled by explosive gun powder, man certainly has imagination. Congradts on the win James. Well deserved.
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September 25, 2009 at 10:26 AM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 25, 2009 at 7:36 AM
Congrat to YOU James!!! Good luck in the finals!!! love, shar xoxo
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September 25, 2009 at 6:57 AM
James,...congratulations on your first round entries,..well deserved Sir ! Great poetry for true ! james
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September 25, 2009 at 4:04 AM
Dear James, Best wishes through to the next round. Love Lainie
Devonshire Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 12:28 PM
Congratulations, James! Had you submitted "Maiden Voyage"?
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 10:36 AM
Congratulations on your 2 poems making it through the first round James.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
Shango Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 6:07 PM
Sin is a mysterious force ... and war is broken out in all of nature ... every thing has a defence system ... except the heart in love with poetry. Bravo.
Williams Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 7:38 AM
Hi James.... nice work my man... applauding. Thanks for the comment
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May 9, 2009 at 5:32 AM
James, you have written a very insightful poem. You taught me something new today. I found the cutest picture of a loris. I had no clue what they were.. Darling creatures they are. Link http://images.google.com/images?client=opera&rls=en&q=loris&sourceid=opera&oe=utf-8&um=1&ie=UTF-8&ei=C3cFSoj5M5_htgeF7qiIBw&sa=X&oi=image_result_group&resnum=4&ct=title
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May 8, 2009 at 2:31 PM
Perhaps I'm a bit cynical, James, but I fear that if the animals' weapons were in human hands we would surely use them "against each other." A very thought-provoking and powerful write! Love, Carolyn
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