Poisoned Words

Thanks Jannie I woke up with the idea of writing a flowing poem with just 2 syllables and this was the result:-) hugs Jan xx

Thanks for dropping by Paul .. its a busy time for us all at the moment. I will do another contest after this one as it seems to be filling rather quickly I only put it on last night!:-) love to all hugs Jan xx

Any theme you want jean - would prefer serious themes but if you go with humour that's fine:-) hugs jan xx

I would prefer serious subjects Andrea but if you want to do a sad funny one that will be fine:-) hugs Jan xx

I never know what will flow from my pen Mark:-) I woke up with the idea of challenging myself to write 2 syllables a line to make up a story and it turned out dark and deep. I may try a more upbeat poem:-) hugs jan xx

Thanks John:-) San thought it was shaped a bit like a dagger too:-) hugs Jan xx

:-) thanks David:-) I don't know if I've created a new form:-) I could only find footles with 2 syllables - this is just an idea I had when I woke up... the poem is dark and sad but I'm delighted I've had so much positive feedback:-) hugs jan xx

It's a little different to my usual style I wanted to challenge myself to write a poem using just 2 syllables in each line but not a footle:-) I've put up a contest using this form i hope you give it a try Doug :-) hugs jan xx

Thanks Judy - thankfully its a fiction write for me... I have set up a contest using this form I hope give it a go:-) hugs Jan xx

Thanks Deb I couldn't find a proper name for this form so I thought 'duplex' was quite apt. I look forward to reading your poem - just have fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Thank you:-):-) I hope you will have a go at the contest I have just set Darren:-) hugs Jan xx

Thanks Nette:-) hugs jan xx

Breaking away from an abusive relationship must be so hard Eve especially when your self confidence is eroded away:-( hugs jan xx

Thanks Tim - I have no idea where this came from just challenged myself 2 syllables a line and whoosh dark and deep but so totally different from fun footles:-) hugs Jan xx

oh wow that's great Alexis:-) I'm determined not to peek I hope you enjoyed my little challenge!:-) hugs jan xx

Hey Jan, I already wrote one for your contest. I hope it's what you're looking for:-) Alexis

So different from the footle form Alexis - will put up a contest using this form so get thinking:-) hugs Jan xx

Yes I think she overdid the makeup a bit!:-) hugs Jan xx

I will put up a contest later ....Get your thinking cap on Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

That sounds like it would be fun and challenging.

I think I may set it up as a challenge for a contest Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

I am pleased my poem has had so many comments Daniel:-0 hugs jan xx

I think I may set up a contest using this form Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Thanks Probir its a little out of my normal style !:-) hugs jan xx

Thanks Paloma its so different to my usual style but i thought i would challenge myself with 2 syllables a line .. will stick to fun footles in the future!!:-) hugs Jan xx

I think reading so many of those depression poems wasn't a good thing lol:-( hugs Jan xx

Not like my normal style lol:-) hugs Jan xx