Poison

Blood drips from a rose thorn in the spring rain, your words resonate, humming in my ears. Love, the cruel word, seeps from my lips in shame while the bite from your lips has brought me tears. A wicked game played, my heart, the dice rolled. I came out the loser, 'tis sad but true. A cowering heart shall one day be bold, for now, my colors are fading in blue. Shall time alone heal the aching within? You laughed when I shared my adoration. Days pass with head low, I walk in chagrin. Your banquet has led me to starvation. In time, I shall no longer taste your poison. True love shall free me from this web you have spun. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, April 14, 2012 *English Sonnet for Debbie and Cyndi's Sonneteers Contest Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 5/4/2012 5:20:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in the "Sonneteers" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/27/2012 10:27:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, your poem is so heartbreaking. I especially liked lines 7 and 8. Congrats on your placement and WHERE ARE YOU? You okay? You ARE missed by MANY. hugs, Cyndi
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Date: 4/14/2012 9:34:00 PM
Superb.
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:22:00 PM
"...while the bite from your lips has brought me tears..." ohhhh! Rhonda what a lovely sonnet you have written! best wishes in the contest,love deb
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