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poised poinsettia hiku

scarlet w a ~. ~ . v .~ e s ~. ~ . of love caress moonstone f l a k e s of dusk ~ poised poinsettia

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/26/2025 8:56:00 PM

Beautiful. Glad you're a winner here!! <3

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/26/2025 12:39:00 PM

Pretty! Congrats!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/26/2025 8:59:00 AM

Excellent haiku poem display and schematic presentation, dear Ink, you have become an expert in such poetry. It explores love, beauty, and nature with vibrant images and unusual word choices in a sensuous and romantic setting. The juxtaposition of "scarlet" and "moonstone" implies a strong connection between the lovers and nature, combining intense feelings and ethereal beauty. The "poinsettia" may represent love's joyful, lively side, while the "dusk" represents closeness and transition.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/26/2025 5:04:00 AM

Dear Inky, this is so creative and the imagery is beautiful as always. Is it for a contest? ...Hugs

Suzette Richards

Date: 5/25/2025 10:41:00 PM

I like this hiku that Brian is championing. This one by you is rather appealing, Ink :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2025 10:24:00 PM

So delightful. Congrats. You are always unique.

Valsa George

Date: 5/25/2025 9:17:00 PM

'Scarlet waves of love'.... the very expression conveys so much. You are 'thunder' dear friend. You strike deep. Poinsettia, that turns most scarlet during Christmas season. Oh, I love it so much... so is your haiku!

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/25/2025 6:53:00 PM

Engulfed in the fire red freedom of love unbound to the bruises of heartbreak's hysteria She asks not of law or cost, She asks only for respect when the flower of her heart blades...J.A.B.

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 5/25/2025 12:20:00 PM

Hello Ink, this is a beautiful write. Loved your artistic style, my friend. Wishing you a beautiful day.

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/25/2025 12:10:00 PM

Very nice! I looked below at your beautiful twin and your reply looked up the DJ, he is humorous with Justin B, have you heard of MO? he's my favorite comedian! :D bol in Brian's

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/25/2025 10:59:00 AM

Your "hiku" is a fun read and creative write. Your few words say so much. "Good Luck" Have a blessed/fun day writing away...........

Ink Empress
Date: 5/25/2025 11:37:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Paula, i love the flower and was inspired to write on that. Appreciate your kindness always

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 5/25/2025 10:43:00 AM

Oooh scarlet waves of love !!!! I am having some scarlet wave situation … but it’s not love at alllll… moonstone flakes .. ooo that’s lovely … beautiful haiku indeeed

Ink Empress
Date: 5/25/2025 10:45:00 AM

Hahahah me too! Those scarlet waves

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 5/25/2025 10:40:00 AM

Another one

Ink Empress
Date: 5/25/2025 10:41:00 AM

Dj khaled lolol

Robert James Liguori

Date: 5/25/2025 10:36:00 AM

This is the greatest hiku ever written. I just love poinsettias too! I like how the poinsettia is poised. Lovely.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/25/2025 10:36:00 AM

Why thank you dear robert, i appreciate your enthusiastic comments always. Sending you light