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Poise Met Noise

indescribable, untranscribable ~ imbibable, your exotic, quixotic perfume spiraled me into a quandary of dirty laundry, penance, no superintendents in attendance I come from ragged boys, no poise, just noise ~ a quiver of quavers, no saviors of silence, but if some sap sullies our sister we'll flatten him you come from platinum a blessed nest of nuance, a quay of kindness, finesse, fineness ~ savvy sophistication, subtlety a quaint saint I ain't then poise met noise you became my bible; undeniable, heavy sighable, unclassifiable ~ indescribable Written 12 Feb 2021

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Date: 4/23/2021 11:21:00 AM
Wow John, this contest inspired a wonderful creation from you. Your word choices blew me away in this fine poem and it is much deserving of its First Place recognition. Congratulations my friend! Since I have been away for nine months there are so many poems of yours I have missed so I am going back to catch up. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 3/8/2021 6:11:00 AM
Great John :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 3/8/2021 4:23:00 AM
Very nicely done John, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 3/8/2021 4:08:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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Date: 3/7/2021 7:39:00 PM
John, I love the clever word play of this poem that just tumbles down the page!! Congrats on your mighty win. God bless
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Date: 3/6/2021 4:12:00 PM
what wonderful word pairings I read twice and love the flow and tongue twister qualities, many congrats John:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/6/2021 2:49:00 PM
I love the beat to this and the magnetic pairing of opposites. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/6/2021 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful and creative write. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 3/6/2021 9:03:00 AM
John, I'm so delighted with this, the meter and clever word pairings had me smiling every time I read it (which was many, many times) - especially 'exotic, quixotic perfume' and 'a quiver of quavers' - hopefully your muse will come out of hibernation soon so we can all get more classic John Watts poems (oh and congratulations too)
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John Watt
Date: 3/7/2021 11:27:00 PM
Michelle, I can't thank you enough for stimulating this writing. It was a lot of fun to do, and to read through the other entries. Thank you for the encouraging words and placement. We'll see how long this hibernation lasts, lol.
Date: 2/21/2021 7:21:00 AM
This has to win John, what a gem, I read it twice to understand it fully, a very clever poem and when noise met poise it all fell into place. What a fantastic write, kudo's John my friend, this is going into my faves. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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John Watt
Date: 3/1/2021 2:41:00 PM
Thank you for the fave and your delightful comment. It truly made me day. Thank you for such kind affirmation, my dear friend. Blessings and hugs ~ John
Date: 2/17/2021 12:08:00 AM
Wow! Your brilliance outshines everything, John:) I see a sure winner:)
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John Watt
Date: 3/1/2021 2:42:00 PM
Thank you for such a kind comment, Jo. I hope all is well with you ~ John
Date: 2/16/2021 1:08:00 PM
WoW John! This is excellent. Love the $10.00 use of the $5.00 words. Clever man. Bravo! Loved this. God Bless, JB
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/6/2021 9:04:00 AM
And I have learned a lot from you too, John :)
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John Watt
Date: 2/16/2021 1:52:00 PM
Loved your comment, Judy. I've learned a lot from Michelle Faulkner about pairing or tripling words that sound good together. Glad you enjoyed ~ John
Date: 2/15/2021 1:38:00 PM
WoW!John, You took the chosen words and wove them into an outstanding piece. In my opinion, you nailed it. There’s too many stellar lines to chose from, so I chose them all. Excellent job. I might as well say congrats; this is a winner, my friend. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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John Watt
Date: 2/15/2021 8:57:00 PM
Alexis, your enthusiasm for poetry and your downright friendly encouragement are both contagious. Thank you for that, and for this lovely comment. Be well, my friend ~ John
Date: 2/14/2021 3:19:00 PM
Hi, John! The volumes of literature here speak for itself, my friend. Wow, indescribable, undeniable, unclassifiable, sums its work in its cleverly penned way. Fantastic John. Best of Wishes, William
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John Watt
Date: 2/15/2021 1:22:00 AM
Thank you William, very kind of you to drop by for a read and the thoughtful words you leave behind. Take care, my friend ~ John
Date: 2/13/2021 8:58:00 PM
"I come from ragged boys, no poise, just noise- you became my bible" Wow ! I love everything about this. There is something about opposites attract. I believe this to be true. You have created that comparison perfectly here, my dear friend. Imperfectly so. :) I am smiling. I am placing this in favorites as well. :) Hugs, Brandy
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John Watt
Date: 2/15/2021 1:22:00 AM
You humble me with your fave and your endearing words of appreciation, Brandy. Enjoy your week, dear friend ~ John
Date: 2/13/2021 7:15:00 PM
Clever as ever, John. I enjoy the muse, and like your chances with the P's and Q's! Best always, Gershon
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John Watt
Date: 2/15/2021 1:21:00 AM
Great to hear from you, my friend, and always humbling to have you reading my words. Blessings ~ John
Date: 2/13/2021 9:44:00 AM
wow, John, what clever use of language with all that alliteration in there. It's so good to see you posting a new poem. Keep it up, my friend.
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John Watt
Date: 2/15/2021 1:20:00 AM
I sure appreciate your faithful encouragement, especially as I go through a dry period. It means more than I can say. Thank you, dear friend ~ John
Date: 2/12/2021 12:42:00 PM
This poem just cries out to be read aloud, John! I love your word choices here - wonderful!
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John Watt
Date: 2/12/2021 3:11:00 PM
your comment made my day, my friend... thank you!

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