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Pointless Quills

Pointless Quills What of humor’s quick and barbed defense so thrilled me in its parry-thrust dismay hid me beneath its thicket dense a demon come to curse – not pray used me as the sword of anger’s wrath poison spittle foaming on my tongue slashing at the shadows of my past a warrior commissioned much too young. Loneliness – cold comforts fearful ruse recoiling from the touch of vacant years coiled, snake-like, its venom set to loose stinging pain of long forgotten tears. Cornered in the depths of memory’s crypt peering over soul-less, dusty sills amorphous sliding into nondescript sad porcupine denuded of its quills. John G. Lawless 8/13/2017

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Date: 8/14/2017 3:35:00 PM
Brilliant John...
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Date: 8/14/2017 3:28:00 PM
So deep and well crafted, john. That last line. AWESOME
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Date: 8/14/2017 12:16:00 PM
Your thoughts on days gone by are written in wonderful verse, John. If a porcupine knew what you write, he'd be happy to have contributed his quills so your poetry could be shared.
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Date: 8/14/2017 10:26:00 AM
This is deep and very well written John. Really nice! -- Dean
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Date: 8/14/2017 10:06:00 AM
Gorgeous.
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