Pointless Quills

Pointless Quills


What of humor’s quick and barbed defense
so thrilled me in its parry-thrust dismay
hid me beneath its thicket dense 
a demon come to curse – not pray

used me as the sword of anger’s wrath
poison spittle foaming on my tongue
slashing at the shadows of my past
a warrior commissioned much too young.

Loneliness – cold comforts fearful ruse
recoiling from the touch of vacant years
coiled, snake-like, its venom set to loose
stinging pain of long forgotten tears.

Cornered in the depths of memory’s crypt
peering over soul-less, dusty sills
amorphous sliding into nondescript
sad porcupine denuded of its quills.


John G. Lawless
8/13/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Smith Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 3:35 PM
Brilliant John...
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 3:28 PM
So deep and well crafted, john. That last line. AWESOME
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 12:16 PM
Your thoughts on days gone by are written in wonderful verse, John. If a porcupine knew what you write, he'd be happy to have contributed his quills so your poetry could be shared.
Wood Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 10:26 AM
This is deep and very well written John. Really nice! -- Dean
Cozart Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 10:06 AM
Gorgeous.
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