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Groom in genes -
bacteria of love
- not in heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Siddikki Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 4:46 AM
@ To all : Thanks for your interesting remark. To me, the passions of true love (though I believe there is no false love) is emitted by some bacterial organism that runs in your blood and radiates the whole of your body and also keeps growing and growing. I reciprocate best wish with best prayers.
Song Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 8:06 PM
Saalik, This Haiku is very interesting-bacteria of love would NOT be considered a positive thing, correct? I like it!
Pettit Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 6:33 PM
Decent writing.
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February 20, 2011 at 12:36 PM
Interesting piece. Gives the reader something to think about. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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