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Point of View

Groom in genes - bacteria of love - not in heart

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Saalik Siddikki

Date: 2/24/2011 4:46:00 AM

@ To all : Thanks for your interesting remark. To me, the passions of true love (though I believe there is no false love) is emitted by some bacterial organism that runs in your blood and radiates the whole of your body and also keeps growing and growing. I reciprocate best wish with best prayers.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/23/2011 8:06:00 PM

Saalik, This Haiku is very interesting-bacteria of love would NOT be considered a positive thing, correct? I like it!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/20/2011 6:33:00 PM

Decent writing.

Date: 2/20/2011 12:36:00 PM

Interesting piece. Gives the reader something to think about. Best wishes with your writing. Karen