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Poets Anthem---Vs--3

V: in the car here we are driving down the street conversing with one another the blurs and visions of passersby though no one we shall meet our flight into one continuous chime phenomenal thoughts our voices shine every verse spoken is a new and improved rhyme a red light blinds us and we slow to a halt words stop short for a moment it's no ones fault leaning over to taste your lips you sense me coming you turn we kiss look into my eyes and i promise you'll find one last verse to ease your mind open your heart i promise I'll be kind we are alone again just you and me connected in ways that are meant to be massaging your aching muscles my fingers in motion feeling you jerk when i pour on cold lotion quiet in my movements you are now asleep in your silence you look blissful you look serene i kiss you goodnight we are meant to be C: i dream in the future us having a kid at that time living in the same crib like a prisoner taking a shiv that's how i feel when we're apart when we met i felt that spark fell in love, you made your mark i dread the day if we were to part lets get rid of these thoughts we are together forever ********************* If you want the true meaning of the song I urge you to read the poem in it's entirety starting with verse one...... JP............01/12/03

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Date: 6/18/2010 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jared. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2010 7:35:00 AM
Congrats. On your Free Verse being featured this week Jared. agape, Moses
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Date: 6/14/2010 1:10:00 PM
Jared..another wonderful featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:40:00 PM
Congrats Jared on your featured poem this week on the Soup...the Poets Anthem shines loudly and proudly my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:36:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece, a well deserved feature! Accept my colorful congrats. Keep your pens dancing to the drumbeat of your passion. You are such a wonderful poet. With love, Adeleke
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:25:00 PM
Congrats Jared on your featured write. Vince
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:48:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/21/2009 10:24:00 AM
Very good of youu to share, thanks, God bless, Moses!
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Date: 7/21/2009 8:14:00 AM
i t is a love song--romantic and flowing--love the style--great job--charma
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Date: 7/7/2009 12:52:00 PM
love it!!!
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Date: 7/6/2009 12:33:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Jared. Carol
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