Poets Anthem---Vs--3

V:

in the car here we are driving down the street
conversing with one another
the blurs and visions of passersby
though no one we shall meet
our flight into one continuous chime
phenomenal thoughts our voices shine
every verse spoken is a new and improved rhyme
a red light blinds us and we slow to a halt
words stop short for a moment
it's no ones fault
leaning over to taste your lips
you sense me coming
you turn
we kiss
look into my eyes and i promise you'll find
one last verse to ease your mind
open your heart
i promise I'll be kind
we are alone again just you and me
connected in ways that are meant to be
massaging your aching muscles
my fingers in motion
feeling you jerk when i pour on cold lotion
quiet in my movements
you are now asleep
in your silence you look blissful
you look serene
i kiss you goodnight
we are meant to be


C:

i dream in the future us having a kid
at that time living in the same crib
like a prisoner taking a shiv
that's how i feel when we're apart
when we met i felt that spark
fell in love, you made your mark
i dread the day if we were to part
lets get rid of these thoughts we are together forever




********************* If you want the true meaning of the song I urge you to read the 
poem in it's entirety starting with verse one...... JP............01/12/03

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/18/2010 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jared. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2010 7:35:00 AM
Congrats. On your Free Verse being featured this week Jared. agape, Moses
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Date: 6/14/2010 1:10:00 PM
Jared..another wonderful featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:40:00 PM
Congrats Jared on your featured poem this week on the Soup...the Poets Anthem shines loudly and proudly my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:36:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece, a well deserved feature! Accept my colorful congrats. Keep your pens dancing to the drumbeat of your passion. You are such a wonderful poet. With love, Adeleke
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:25:00 PM
Congrats Jared on your featured write. Vince
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:48:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/21/2009 10:24:00 AM
Very good of youu to share, thanks, God bless, Moses!
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Date: 7/21/2009 8:14:00 AM
i t is a love song--romantic and flowing--love the style--great job--charma
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Date: 7/7/2009 12:52:00 PM
love it!!!
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Date: 7/6/2009 12:33:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Jared. Carol
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