Poetrysoup Heroes

The best advice came from my hero
since our very first days on the Soup,
he said to me ....be true to yourself
don't try to blend into the group.

When no one wants to write in rhyme
you told me ....write it anyway,
when no one wants to read rhyme,
you said to me ...write it anyway.

If this is your passion, why let it go
all opinions will be hit and miss,
poetry is not what others want you to do
only Heart and Soul make up the artist.

Did Poe try to follow the rest ...oh no
being unique makes any artist great,
perfection is what it is .....to you
only we can control the hand of fate.

So what if we are being a little archaic
by respecting those who came before,
the elders are remembered for a reason
they opened up the modern poet's door.

Thank you for teaching me to believe
because back then I just didn't see,
the talent, the potential, the poet
... that you somehow saw in me.










I have many Poetry Soup heroes....

but this poem is for Chan Hurst, "Just That Archaic Poet" ....RIP


Written on November 10th, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Thomas Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 1:01 PM
Wise words indeed, especially with the arts. This is beautiful Kelly.
Deschler Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on this poem. I really appreciate that :)
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 1:00 AM
Oh wow, I'm glad I read this...I had no idea he passed away. We've commented on each other's work in the past...I've been inactive here for a while, but I'm making my way back. Well great tribute...I love to rhyme too by the way...I'm writing more free verse as of late, but I won't give up on rhyming either. Great work my friend! MC
Deschler Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 9:30 PM
Yes it was a very sad day when I heard the news of Chan's passing. I still miss his presence very much, but his spirit lives on in the great poetry he left us... Thanks so much for your kind comments once again, MC :)
Ainsley Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 11:38 PM
wonderful adventure poetry soup.But I often worry about checking in on a poet like yourself and find you are no longer there. always more light;Thalia
Deschler Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 5:50 PM
Thank you for your nice comments. I really appreciate that... I know what you mean about poets just disappearing from Poetry Soup. I've lost touch with a few very special friends here recently :(
Mac Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 6:26 AM
WOW!!!!! You are a poet hero. Poetry is fascinating. Love what I can read on Poetry Soup. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems. Quincy
Deschler Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 1:19 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Quincy. Please forgive my late reply. I haven't been on Poetry Soup much. Just needed to take a break from writing for awhile... This really is a great poetry site. I hope you enjoy it!!
Anglesey Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 4:42 PM
Very nice Kelly. It was some months after he passed that I found out what had happened. So sorry for the loss of his battles.
Deschler Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Thank you, Karen... The sad news of Chan's passing was a shock to me and everyone here on Poetry Soup. His presence certainly has been missed here.
Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:58 AM
Wonderfully written and nicely witty. I enjoyed every line.
Deschler Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 12:42 AM
I'm so glad you did, Funom. Thank you for commenting :)
Nehls Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 6:49 AM
Hello Kelly. I can certainly relate to this one. Very well written and oh how it touches the soul of this poet. Thanks so much for sharing this one. You are a blessing, my friend..... Robert.
Deschler Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 4:11 PM
Hello Robert. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poems. I appreciate it very much!
Makama Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 1:49 PM
My senses in totality are in awe of your wonderful lines. Liquefied bliss from the boil of glorious words has brought out enchanting aroma beyond scaling. 7 is simply an underscore for this fine share.
Deschler Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 7:59 PM
You are too kind, Funom! I really do appreciate your comments on this poem :)
Fleming Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 2:41 AM
The "Masters" wrote in rhyme for more than one reason: Appealing articulation, Differentiation from normal prose/writing, Cadence and Tempo, Etc and so forth. However the main reason was quite simply this: They saw it as a discipline - It was regarded as a great craft! My very best regards for your New Year, Kelly. :-) john
Deschler Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 9:16 PM
Thank you, John. I agree with your comments. Most of the "Masters" did use rhyme and I think their poems were made memorable because of it... Writing with rhyme can be difficult at times, but I think it is the most beautiful form of poetry... Wishing you and your family all the best for 2016!
George   Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 6:15 AM
He gave you great advice! I too have learned we are all unique in our own way and must be true to who we are. Glad you did dear Kelly. I enjoy your poetry very much! All the best to you in the New Year. Your friend in poetry. Elaine George
Deschler Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 9:04 PM
Thank you very much, Elaine. I truly appreciate your kind words... Wishing you and your family all the best for 2016!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 8:47 PM
What a delightful tribute to your 'Soup Heroes...' I'm sure they all know who they are and will be thrilled by this anonymous recognition. Well done Kelly! Best wishes, Keith
Deschler Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 8:05 PM
Thank you for your nice comments, Keith... This poem was a tribute to my friend, Chan Hurst. He wrote under the penname of Just That Archaic Poet. Sadly, he passed away in 2014 and his presence on this site has really been missed.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 6:21 AM
Poetry is you, penning warm tribute to a friend. And honesty reigns supreme. This, too, is unusual gem. Thank you for sharing this side of you.
Deschler Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 10:46 PM
I really appreciate your nice comments on this poem. They mean a lot to me. Thank you so much, Iris :)
Gasun Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 7:13 PM
Good morning my very dear friend, Kelly! It's so nice to to read this outstanding tribute of yours once again. It's the first poem I read this morning and I'm enjoying it so much. You're also one of the most talented poets here whom I admire-my fave. Thanks a lot for sharing your talent and precious gems and for stopping by on my poem. We both love fruitcakes.:))Wishing you the best always. Sending hugs and smiles. love lots, Leonora
Deschler Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 10:31 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Leonora. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poems. I'm happy that you enjoy them. I always enjoy yours, too... Wishing you all the best for 2016! ...Hugs :)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 8:13 AM
You have some excellent well deserved comments!
Deschler Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 8:57 PM
Thank you, Rick. I appreciate your kindness :)
Muideen Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 2:28 PM
This is a great write my friend. This gem was composed well........A.M.
Deschler Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Thank you so much, Afolabi!
Onclaud Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 8:53 AM
chan will always be with us, kelly.. belated congrats on your win.. this is a beauty!..huggs
Deschler Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Thank you for your kind congrats, Nette... I really do feel that Chan is still near, especially when I'm writing :)
Ward Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 4:18 AM
I am glad Chan Hurst encouraged you. Julia, :)
Deschler Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Thank you, Julia. Chan's encouragement really gave me a boost of confidence and he made me want to continue on with writing :)
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 6:29 PM
I echo the sentiments expressed in your fifth verse... My inspiration comes mostly from 19th and 20th century poets. A lovely tribute to your Soup hero. Best wishes, Keith
Pinet Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 12:46 PM
This is a wonderful tribute poem, praising the virtues and wit of your mentor, hero and poetic friend. Emile.
Deschler Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 9:09 PM
Thank you very much, Emile... Chan's presence has been missed here on The Soup. While I have many heroes on this site, there is no one quite like him!
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 8:10 PM
this is fantastic. How could I not have seen it before? I am guessing it won and i hope it won BIg. One of the best written ones I have seen for a Soup hero. Congratulations. (He WAS indeed a hero for you)
Deschler Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 7:11 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Your encouragement really means a lot. I was truly honored to place first in Catie's contest... Chan was the one person who really made me believe in myself as a writer. I miss his presence very much.
Kendrick Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 9:05 AM
Ahh!! Great tribute to one who was a great role model..I enjoyed reading this contest entry today..Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Deschler Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 9:35 PM
Thank you so much, Sara. I really appreciate your nice comments on this poem... Chan's presence sure has been missed here on The Soup.
Sathasivam Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 10:49 PM
Excellent and beautiful dedication. Congrats. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Deschler Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 9:28 PM
I really appreciate your kind comments and congrats. Thank you, Ravi!
Devnath  Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 8:53 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem. Your Hero is nice person i feel. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
Deschler Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 9:46 PM
Yes he was. Chan had a very big heart and also great enthusiasm and a passion for poetry. His presence is missed here on The Soup... I appreciate your kind congrats and comments, BL. Thank you very much, my friend!
Gasun Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 1:11 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved top win my very dear friend, Kelly! Hugs! love lots, Leonora
Deschler Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 2:42 PM
Thank you so very much, Leonora. I really do appreciate your kind congrats and comments... Hugs :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 7:17 PM
I see this received top honour! Congratulations Kelly.
Deschler Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 12:40 AM
I was pleasantly surprised and honored to place so well in Catie's contest... Once again I will say thank you, Rick :)
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