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There are times when I read some poems,
nice words knitted together to be harmonious
and makes life into a Hollywood romance,
we cry sentimental tears over the trivial.
My almond tree looks like an oversized spider’s web,
it pains me to look at the tree, 
but I also know, say, a month from now
It will strew pink petals on my way be verdant,
a princess in the domesticated landscape.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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De Beaulieu Avatar
April 23, 2020 at 5:27 PM
Hello Jan Hansen, I like the way you went from one topic to another here. Your almond tree will look beautiful once the flowers are grown. Enjoy your evening my fiend. Be safe.
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April 24, 2020 at 5:55 PM
Hello Jan Oskar Hansen,That could be a good thing. Enjoy your evening my frieind. Be safe.
Hansen Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 8:06 AM
Thank you, Darlene De Beaulieu I begin a poem but other thoughts come along and alter the poem
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