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Why I Abhor AI Generated Poems Poetry Contest
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06/15/25 HMS 1-7

nuts and bolts rammed in each line ~ screwed up like a monoku frankenstein

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Date: 7/20/2025 3:02:00 AM
You have just brought monokus to life for me David. Electrifying. Cheers - Gary
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/20/2025 6:08:00 AM
Thanks Gary, yep this one just about sums up the thought process behind my Monokus, first you need a subject, then a jolt of abstraction lol! Cheers David
Date: 6/16/2025 6:37:00 PM
This one is humorous! Top Congrats!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 6/17/2025 3:16:00 AM
Always great to see you pop up in comments Kim, one can but only laugh at the madness (sometimes) cheers David
Date: 6/16/2025 3:06:00 PM
Ha. Good image. Congrats
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David Kavanagh
Date: 6/16/2025 3:12:00 PM
Heya Andrea! I’m actually delighted this one went down so well, cheers David
Date: 6/16/2025 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your creative/fun AI write. Thanks for the laugh... Have a blessed/fun day with your win.............
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David Kavanagh
Date: 6/16/2025 1:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Paula, it was a fun one to put together when it finally came together lol, cheers David
Date: 6/16/2025 10:03:00 AM
- Vincent van Gogh once said: "Conscience is man's compass" :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest, David :) - hugs
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David Kavanagh
Date: 6/16/2025 10:33:00 AM
Very true Anne-Lise; Unfortunately even compasses flip every eon or so! Thanks so much :) cheers David
Date: 6/16/2025 8:40:00 AM
Wow ~ awesome !
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David Kavanagh
Date: 6/16/2025 10:29:00 AM
Thanks Line, glad you enjoyed, cheers David
Date: 6/16/2025 6:54:00 AM
Nice ! I was curious what others came up with... this is great! Xo
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David Kavanagh
Date: 6/16/2025 8:34:00 AM
Heya Crystol, getting Frankenstein’s head on was easy, getting it off and out of the soup will need a whole new toolkit lol! Cheers David
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