Poetry Storm

sullen clouds threaten
 the morning sky, and thunder's
 ominous rumblings
 render me taciturn, but
 my pen speaks above the rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 5/15/2016 4:30:00 PM
So pleased to be back with congratulations, Joseph...well done!:) Regards // paul
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Date: 5/15/2016 5:25:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poems, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/14/2016 6:55:00 PM
Joseph, back to congratulate you on your nice placement in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 5/14/2016 6:01:00 PM
Joseph, I really enjoyed the message in this one. GREAT job and congrats in my contest. Soupmail.
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Date: 5/13/2016 12:00:00 PM
That's a mighty pen that can speak, no matter, exactly what's necessary. Great write!
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Date: 5/9/2016 2:23:00 PM
- Great one, Joseph - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/9/2016 1:22:00 PM
I loved this piece. Writing must be above all other distractions. Poetry is passion....it is life. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/9/2016 11:17:00 AM
Love the message of creative power in this, Joseph. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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Date: 5/8/2016 6:31:00 AM
Hi Joseph...I'm no tanka expert, but these lines speak to me (especially the ending) so I do not hesitate to label it 'excellent'! // paul
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Date: 5/7/2016 8:45:00 PM
excellent Joseph
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Date: 5/7/2016 7:44:00 PM
That last line is well amazing! Great write!
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Date: 5/7/2016 10:07:00 AM
Love the last line:)
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