Poetry Storm

sullen clouds threaten
 the morning sky, and thunder's
 ominous rumblings
 render me taciturn, but
 my pen speaks above the rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 4:30 PM
So pleased to be back with congratulations, Joseph...well done!:) Regards // paul
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May 15, 2016 at 5:25 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poems, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Joseph, back to congratulate you on your nice placement in the contest. Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 6:01 PM
Joseph, I really enjoyed the message in this one. GREAT job and congrats in my contest. Soupmail.
Williams Gault Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 12:00 PM
That's a mighty pen that can speak, no matter, exactly what's necessary. Great write!
Andresen Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 2:23 PM
- Great one, Joseph - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 1:22 PM
I loved this piece. Writing must be above all other distractions. Poetry is passion....it is life. Good luck in the contest
Haight Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Love the message of creative power in this, Joseph. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
Callus Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 6:31 AM
Hi Joseph...I'm no tanka expert, but these lines speak to me (especially the ending) so I do not hesitate to label it 'excellent'! // paul
Mohn Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 8:45 PM
excellent Joseph
Vaso Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 7:44 PM
That last line is well amazing! Great write!
Daniel Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 10:07 AM
Love the last line:)
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