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To single out special people on soup is such a hard task So many people have helped me, so it’s a really big ask I discovered on soup there is an angel without wings Her name is FJ Thomas and her praises I’ll gladly sing A month after I joined soup an e-mail appeared It said I was a ‘Premium Member’ it was so weird I contacted soup said a mistake has been made I’m a Premium Member … but I haven’t paid They said the donor of my gift didn’t wish to be named But I had no way to thank them, I felt so ashamed I wrote a thank you poem so that they would know Someone made it a favourite – but their name didn’t show I later learned it was FJ Thomas, but by then she’d left the site I wanted to make her proud of me, so I tried very hard to write I’d not written a poem for many years,not since I was at school Began writing when my hubby got cancer – a disease so cruel Flo’s gift to a complete stranger meant the whole world to me Writing became my lifeline I hope I’ve used her gift wisely ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Since joining soup I began to collaborate You really should try it - it really is great Teamed up with a guy called Darren Watson His sense of humour was awesome oh boy we had some fun I was a complete beginner and Darren encouraged me Telling me how well I wrote and he loved my creativity We began to collaborate as Jadazzle United Our friendship blossomed, we were simply delighted E mails would fly and my self confidence soared With Darren around there was no time to be bored My world was shattered when dad was diagnosed with cancer Darren was there to comfort me, often with a witty answer Sadly Darren became ill and our writing came to an end I spent many many weeks trying to trace my lovely friend Contact was established with his family and after over a year I got an e mail from Darren, I was overjoyed to hear Darren’s positivity for the future gave my heart a lift Our friendship is so precious just like a priceless gift We’ve both had ups and downs in our lives recently We're writing together again and we’re as happy as can be Contest:- Poetry Soup Heroes Sponsor Catie Lindsey My Poetry Soup heros F J Thomas Darren Watson

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Date: 11/18/2015 3:58:00 PM
Flo is a true treasure and a beautiful lady inside and out...Something you may not know, but she and I live about 40 miles apart! We have been trying to meet for coffee with her and her family for over a year now but still have not been able to pull it off but we surely will sometime!! GREAT tribute Jan and many congratulations - Tim
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Date: 11/18/2015 6:05:00 PM
It would be so lovely to meet some of the people here Tim I've been lucky to meet Paul Callus twice - he's a delightful gentleman:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/18/2015 1:15:00 AM
It was difficult to choose from the many special people we have on the Soup. FJ and Darren are two great heroes and very deserving of this heartfelt tribute... Well done, Jan :) Congrats on a win!
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Date: 11/18/2015 2:45:00 AM
Thanks Kelly:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/14/2015 7:34:00 PM
I like your choices and heart felt message. Congratulations Jan.
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Date: 11/14/2015 7:39:00 PM
Thanks Richard:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/14/2015 12:16:00 PM
This is a wonderful tribute to your heroes, and I congratulate you on your win.
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Date: 11/14/2015 12:21:00 PM
Thanks Dan:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2015 8:57:00 PM
What a heartfelt write and the story you shared is wonderful! Jan congratulations on this wonderful write it was one of my top favorites for this contest. That gift came from a very special person. I am glad you shared this touching write.
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Date: 11/13/2015 3:47:00 AM
Flo gave me the best gift I have ever received in my life - writing has changed my life so so much - next week I give a talk to some of the creative writing students at school - I hope to be able to inspire them like FJ did to me:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/12/2015 7:15:00 PM
Very heartfelt and such a nice tribute, Jan. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/13/2015 3:45:00 AM
Thanks Sandra:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/12/2015 6:58:00 PM
Congratulations. Skat
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Date: 11/13/2015 3:45:00 AM
Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/12/2015 6:02:00 PM
Jan, very nice tribute to your friends, congratulations
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Date: 11/12/2015 6:04:00 PM
Thanks Broken Wings I hope Darren is back on th site soon I can't remember if I sent this to him or not:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 11/12/2015 5:46:00 PM
Jan, true friendship shinned bright this winning write. Congratulations on your win it was well deserved:-)Alexis
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Date: 11/12/2015 5:49:00 PM
Thanks so much Alexis it is very tough to single out certain people I have 'met' some wonderful people during my poetry journey:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/20/2015 10:04:00 PM
Jan, I haven't read any poem of others on heroes, but this is an absolute tribute to your Angel on earth and Darren! God Bless them both for me this poem has to be the real win! A 7 !
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Date: 10/21/2015 1:35:00 AM
Thanks again Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/20/2015 10:03:00 PM
Jan, I haven't read any poem of others on heroes, but this is an absolute tribute to your Angel on earth and Darren! God Bless them both for me this poem has to be the real win! A 7 !
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Date: 10/21/2015 1:35:00 AM
Thanks Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/17/2015 7:52:00 AM
Well done, Jan! You had no problem choosing your two heroes...very fitting that they receive this honour. We have both had a most lovely visit from this wonderful angel, and I will always cherish it. Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/17/2015 9:52:00 AM
Flo's gift meant so much to me Paul - it spurred me on to use it well and I hope she is pleased with the progress I have made I just wanted to make her proud - I wonder if it would have been the same if I hadn't had the gift - as for Darren he is an incredibly special friend:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/17/2015 5:52:00 AM
This is so so lovely, dear Jan!! All the best in the contest!!
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:55:00 AM
Thanks Sneha it is actually quite a challenge to single out special people as there are so many that have helped me here :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/17/2015 3:09:00 AM
Love the upbeat tone of this write, Jan. We have one common hero :-). Yours is such an inspiring story and I can feel the depth of gratitude and affection. These are the stuff that create more than just ordinary acquaintances. People who made an impact on our lives because of what they did for us and so they leave an indelible mark. You did them justice with your own style. Great rhythm and rhyme. Way to go, Jan! hugs!
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:45:00 AM
Yes we do share a hero Kim and angel without wings who has given us such a wonderful gift and Darren was such a support to me up until he got ill and all I can do is be there for him:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/17/2015 2:14:00 AM
Jan this is such a heartfelt Poem. I was really touched by your gift and the friendships you have developed. Wow. That is so wonderful to know.. Blessings your way I wish you and all you love good health and Happiness.
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Date: 10/17/2015 2:23:00 AM
Thanks Michael I have been on an incredible journey since I started writing and my friendship with Darren is incredibly special. FJ's gift was so unexpected and spurred me on to do the best I can and try to be a good writer and make her proud that her gift had been used to the best of my ability:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/17/2015 1:41:00 AM
So many sick people, so much sadness, so many that care to be there for you. A gift from an unsolicited angel and another from a would be stranger, both blessings without end. Beautiful heartfelt words from a woman who has already won ... CayCay
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Date: 10/17/2015 2:12:00 AM
Caycay I've been on an amazing journey since I joined soup and made some wonderful friends but the connection Darren and I have is very special :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/16/2015 9:59:00 PM
Jan, this is an awesome tribrute. I really didn't know FJ very well. But what I saw was a beautiful and kind person. Everything people said about was good. I'm moved every time I read about you and Darren's friendship because its so amazing. Great job! Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis7
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Date: 10/17/2015 2:10:00 AM
Thanks Alexis for your lovely comment:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/16/2015 8:25:00 PM
very nicely done, Jan. I had an idea how to do this one, but it kind of left my mind. I will be taking an unconventional approach! it was sure nice of Flo to do what she did. Have you talked to Darren this week? Let me know in an email. We were both so busy this week.
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Date: 10/17/2015 2:09:00 AM
Thanks Andrea it is a tough challenge - will mail you:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/16/2015 8:09:00 PM
I believe what i read, is what you portray in many of your poems,, you are indeed a very sincere, not only poet but a person also.
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Date: 10/17/2015 2:08:00 AM
This is written from the heart Harry - the journey Darren and I have been on has been tough but I never gave up on our friendship and continued to write letters send cards etc even though I only had very little direct contact in over a year - he is a very special friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/16/2015 7:48:00 PM
This is very touching, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/17/2015 2:04:00 AM
Thanks Richard:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/16/2015 6:45:00 PM
Excellent ....poets...and poetry.....
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Date: 10/17/2015 2:04:00 AM
Thanks Judy it is so hard to single out people like we found on our blog:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 10/16/2015 4:38:00 PM
AWwwe...this is so sweet, Jan :) There are many kind souls here on PS. Wish the blog site lately could reflect this fact!
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Date: 10/16/2015 4:43:00 PM
I am saddened reading the blogs Laura it makes soup very unpleasant with the bitching and back biting - no wonder people give up and leave - the apathy on the site at the moment is the worst I have seen since I joined - thankfully there are manywonderful people on soup and that is what keeps me here:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/16/2015 4:30:00 PM
Some great heroes Jan...I don't think this contest will fill up quickly.
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Date: 10/16/2015 4:32:00 PM
It's a real challenge to single out people but Flo's generosity has never left me and as for Darren ... who else could I choose but my poetry soup soul mate:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/16/2015 3:35:00 PM
Jan, this is terrific tribute to TWO friends you'd never known if not for PS. How kind that FJ, a stranger, gave you a gift to rekindle your desire to write. And how wonderful that you and Darren have helped each other through rough times. Well written and well wishes in the contest. ~ Lin ~
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Date: 10/16/2015 3:40:00 PM
I was blown away by Flo's generosity and all i wanted to do was write and make her proud that her gift was being used wisely - sadly she left but then she cam back this year - as for Darren he is incredibly special as a friend and I know we will always be there for each other through good times and bad:-)
Date: 10/16/2015 3:11:00 PM
Oh Jan....what an excellent job you did on your entry for the contest! I can tell you put time and effort and love into this wonderful creation! Brava my friend! So happy you are a Poetry Soup Member! #7
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Date: 10/16/2015 3:15:00 PM
Connie it's been a lifeline to me I never picked up a pen before my hubby had his cancer surgery and I wrote a poem called 'Splendid Isolation' I started to write more and posted a few poems on a friends FB page - someone I know saw them - she is a member here -and it took her a month of persuading me before I posted my poems here and I've found a creativity I never knew existed - I know I would never have got through the last 20 months if I hadn't started to write:-) hugs jan xx
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