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Poetry Soup

A bowl of borscht, split pea, or vasale' sublime
Add a cup of apt metaphor and a pinch of fine rhyme
Stir in a dash of passion and a pinch of zeal for flavor
Poetry Soup Voila' a scrumptious dish you shall savor!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kingston Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 10:14 PM
This was so clever, I hope to write like this someday. I would love some when my Poetry mind becomes a blank slate.
Anaya Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 7:09 PM
Gourmet poetry soup, it's just the right flavors. Enjoyed! ~Anaya
Empress Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 3:09 AM
Second attempt at commenting on this for some reason page disappeared when I first tried. I love the way youv written this dear robert, pinch of zeal and cup of apt metaphors is all we need for a poetic soup so worthy of trying! Pleasure reading this. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always
Gorelick Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 10:32 AM
I was aiming for a bit of light and jaunty relief. Glad to have brought you a pinch of pleasure, Ink. My best Robert
One Avatar
June 7, 2024 at 1:29 PM
I love your take on this.. very clever..
Gorelick Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 10:33 AM
Touched by your sentiments, thank you. All my best, Robert
Beaufort Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 10:01 AM
Robert, I am smiling at the correlation you make between soup and poetry. It's so very clever considering our domain name here. A connection that's making me smile big time.
Gorelick Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 10:34 AM
So glad you took the thyme to share a smile. Thank you, Duke. Robert
Goldsmith Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 11:56 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful "Poetry Soup" write/recipe. I have never had it with meat. Sounds wonderful. You cooking??? Hahaha!!! "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have A Wonderful/Blessed Day Writing Away......
Gorelick Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 10:36 AM
Actually, I'm a vegetarian, Paula. I'll have to reprimand my executive secretary. lol. Thank you, for kind words. I'll be right there with you. Robert
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