Poetry Soup

P  oetry Soup to me is as a joint family
O  ptimizing my chances of growth as a poet
E  njoining warm and genial camaraderie
T  hough from different countries and climes
R elationships are eagerly formed and kept intact
Y oung and old congregate here to share and fare

S  ome poets stand out as beacons of light
O  pening  new avenues and vistas of thought
U  mpteen are the chances to be inspired by enlivening verse
P  roudly I proclaim our fraternity with a thankful heart

August.20.2022

~Placed First~

Poetry Soup beyond its Name Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Beata Agustin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Alex Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 9:23 PM
"is as a joint family" - Great comparison. Congratulations on your First placement.
Agustin Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 8:36 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this beautiful tribute to PS... So delighted am I with your last line, "Proudly I proclaim our fraternity with a thankful heart." God bless you.
George Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 8:55 AM
Wow.... so happy to hear that it is chosen for a win. Thanks a lot Beata for the chance given and also for including it in the winner's list.....
Callus Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 12:18 PM
This lovely poem is proof that Soup can be a welcoming home to one and all, Valsa. It also shows that you have settled in with ease and been granted satisfaction. ~ Best regards // paul
George Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 9:50 AM
Yes, so sure dear Paul. I feel very happy here. Reading poems of great poets like you is indeed another pleasure. Thanks a lot !
Baker Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 2:24 PM
Your view of Poetry Soup is accurate and pleasing my friend. You are a wonderful part of all you've described in your poem. Good luck in the contest! Bill
George Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 9:48 AM
Thank you so much dear Bill . You are a great friend I could come across through poetry soup.
Proxenos Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 11:22 AM
We are like an extended family group, who support each other and surprise one another and who are proud when Admin chooses their poem as POTD. We can write a short note or letter to each other on soupmail, others have a blog, i fear I have been lax of late, but as do others i catch up with Poetry Soup whenever I can. I am so happy to have discovered this special POETRY SOUP GROUP! A wonderful entry, best of luck Valsa my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
George Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 9:47 AM
I share your thoughts dear Jenny. I too am busy with all my house work, though retired. Sad that I am not in a position to read as many poems as I want. Still a day without poetry soup is an empty day for me. Thanks a lot Jenny for your very appreciative comment
Buhagiar Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 10:41 PM
A lovely poem. Best of luck.
George Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 9:42 AM
Thank you much dear Victor
Wolf Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 7:50 PM
Hope the Soup continues to be a supportive and inspiring venue for you, Valsa. :) gw
George Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 9:41 AM
Thank you Gershon for your sweet wish
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 2:38 PM
A great tribute. So true. Well written :)
George Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 9:40 AM
Thanks a lot Heidi
Leffanta Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 9:44 AM
Thanks for stirring the pot! Aloha!
George Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 9:40 AM
It is warm and yummy ! Have one cup full :) Thank you Rico
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 6:52 AM
A wonderful description in this tribute to Poetry Soup. Endearing sentiments you convey, Valsa, in ornate vocabulary. Excellent as always.
George Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 8:58 AM
Thanks a lot Vijay.... However I know that what I have written is no match to what you have written on Poetry Soup :)
May Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 6:18 AM
It's a family, Wonderful write Valsa
George Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 8:56 AM
Yes, that family feeling makes one spend much time in Poetry Soup. Thanks a lot dear friend, Joseph
Poet Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 6:11 AM
Valsa, you have written the most incredible acrostic poem. You have, without a doubt, surpassed its Name via your affectionate and artistic expansion! Poetrysoup! A source of unending love, a cascade of the unparalleled beauty of human experience, and a plethora of opportunities and potentials that make it possible for us to progress and learn. Best wishes in the contest.
George Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 8:53 AM
I don't know how I should thank you for making me feel that I have penned something very outstanding even when my poem is just average. Thanks a lot for your wonderful comment in flowery language.... dear Lasaad
Trifiatis Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 6:01 AM
Your conception of POETRYSOUP, my dearest sweet, Valsa, is God-inspiring! May it be so forever! Blessings!
George Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 6:11 AM
Thank you so much sweet friend ! Stay Happy and healthy. Blessings...!
Mcintosh Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 5:41 AM
Love this. So true and beautiful. God bless you. Love, Gina
George Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 5:57 AM
Thanks a lot Gina . Your appreciation counts much to me.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 5:08 AM
Dear friend Valsa, you have lovingly and artistically gone beyond its Name! Poetrysoup! A fountain of Love.. a flow of human nature beauty.. a world of possibilities and capabilities enabling us to learn and grow.. A true bond with dear friends and fellow poets we come to know and trace their wonderful personalities through their amazing fine poetry, their deep thoughts and genuine feelings.. You have displayed much more than that in your stunning Acrostic! How wonderful reading you dear friend! So much a pleasure shared in Poetrysoup! Stay blessed with the power of your pen! My deepest regards and blessings.. Love and hugs.
George Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 6:05 AM
Indeed Poetry Soup embodies so much and more, opening before us a world of possibilities and opportunities enabling us to learn and grow. Besma, you have so rightly put it. As ever, I am thrilled to read your beautiful comment. In fact I missed you much ! Keep penning wonderful verse to escort us to the lofty realms of poetic fancy and beauty. You are a gifted poet and a true friend, I always feel ! Thank you so much for your sweet words!
Kendrick Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 3:43 AM
It is a nice place to come to enjoy reading our favorite poets and see some new ones added from time to time. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page.Your work reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara
George Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 6:09 AM
It is a hearty experience being part of poetry soup for all of us. Once we are here, we never know how time flies . We can learn so much from one another and hone our talents too. Thanks a lot dear Sara...
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