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Ocean draws me love Come, come relax as waves tap Toes, pelicans, gulls Fun floating face down Snorkel, mask, strange ocean clown Below fish dart, chase Look for love, food, fun, frolic Similiar needs_fish~humans Love, food, fun, frolic,friendship Fish congregate in close schools Human congregate in needs Needs as poetry shared Contest:"Fun & Frolic" Sponsor:Linda-Marie Written by: Sara Kendrick

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Date: 6/18/2011 7:18:00 AM
Beautifully said Sara, poetry so does bring people together. Many congrats on your deserved win :)
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Date: 6/13/2011 8:00:00 PM
Sara, Great to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/10/2011 1:02:00 PM
Many Congratulations Sara on your wonderful win in the contest of Linda's. love, gautami
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Date: 6/9/2011 9:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem here, Sara, Good way to use the words she gave us!! Hope you have a great friday!
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Date: 6/9/2011 12:13:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win in Linda's contest ;-)
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:53:00 AM
very lovely and creative piece of fine poetry. thank you for commenting on Little Blue Eyes.
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:23:00 AM
Lovely poem. Many congratulations on your win, Sara : )
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Fun and Frolic" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:08:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, Sara
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Date: 6/8/2011 5:22:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your top ten win in my contest luv..
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Date: 6/8/2011 2:26:00 PM
Great write Sarah, i am sure this will win a highly placed position.....
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Date: 6/8/2011 12:35:00 PM
So true Sara you done great with this one.Thanks for all your kind comments and lovely congrats you send.I'm only able to write one comment for the several you send cause i only have one finger to type with but read them all.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 6/8/2011 5:32:00 AM
Sara, I really enjoyed this write of yours today.. Wishing you all the best for the contest and thank you for always popping in on my side of the world :)
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Date: 6/7/2011 9:31:00 PM
Beautiful Tanka Sara. Fun, fun, fun! I've been addicted to poetry lately. Nice escape from my busy schedule. I will follow you in Soup. Dalila
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Date: 6/7/2011 3:37:00 PM
beautiful entry to the contest with this write, good luck, sara
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Date: 6/7/2011 2:33:00 PM
what a delightful tanka, sara.... a feast of images! winning wishes to you and congrats in my contest! :) huggs , nette
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Date: 6/7/2011 2:29:00 PM
Beautiful is the word for this lovely poem~~
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