Sara Kendrick Poet Tanka

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Ocean draws me love
Come, come relax as waves tap
Toes, pelicans, gulls

Fun floating face down
Snorkel, mask, strange ocean clown
Below fish dart, chase
Look for love, food, fun, frolic
Similiar needs_fish~humans

Love, food, fun, frolic,friendship
Fish congregate in close schools
Human congregate in needs
Needs as poetry shared



Contest:"Fun & Frolic"
Sponsor:Linda-Marie
Written by: Sara Kendrick

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James Fraser June 18, 2011 at 7:18 AM Beautifully said Sara, poetry so does bring people together. Many congrats on your deserved win :)

John Freeman June 13, 2011 at 8:00 PM Sara, Great to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Gautami Phookan June 10, 2011 at 1:02 PM Many Congratulations Sara on your wonderful win in the contest of Linda's. love, gautami

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2011 at 9:04 PM Congratulations on your poem here, Sara, Good way to use the words she gave us!! Hope you have a great friday!

Wilma Neels June 9, 2011 at 12:13 PM Sara, congratulations on your win in Linda's contest ;-)

James Foulk June 9, 2011 at 10:53 AM very lovely and creative piece of fine poetry. thank you for commenting on Little Blue Eyes.

Jack Horne June 9, 2011 at 10:23 AM Lovely poem. Many congratulations on your win, Sara : )

Carol Sunshine Brown June 9, 2011 at 7:08 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Fun and Frolic" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta June 9, 2011 at 7:08 AM My congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 8, 2011 at 5:22 PM Congrats Sara on your top ten win in my contest luv..

Joe Maverick June 8, 2011 at 2:26 PM Great write Sarah, i am sure this will win a highly placed position.....

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet June 8, 2011 at 12:35 PM So true Sara you done great with this one.Thanks for all your kind comments and lovely congrats you send.I'm only able to write one comment for the several you send cause i only have one finger to type with but read them all.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Wilma Neels June 8, 2011 at 5:32 AM Sara, I really enjoyed this write of yours today.. Wishing you all the best for the contest and thank you for always popping in on my side of the world :)

Dalila Agtani June 7, 2011 at 9:31 PM Beautiful Tanka Sara. Fun, fun, fun! I've been addicted to poetry lately. Nice escape from my busy schedule. I will follow you in Soup. Dalila

Dr.Ram Mehta June 7, 2011 at 3:37 PM beautiful entry to the contest with this write, good luck, sara

Nette Onclaud June 7, 2011 at 2:33 PM what a delightful tanka, sara.... a feast of images! winning wishes to you and congrats in my contest! :) huggs , nette

Constance La France June 7, 2011 at 2:29 PM Beautiful is the word for this lovely poem~~