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toilet humour it’s a splash in the can I dream of roses modern Senryu 4,6,5 syllables Contest Short form Poetry Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich 05~08~16
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Kimathi Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 3:31 PM
Hi Jan. Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Thanks Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx
Dutta Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 1:31 AM
Congrats Jan to win on the cute senryu
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 4:50 PM
Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 7:21 PM
I think you are one of the few who can write about this subject and make it sound appealing! Lol. Back to give you congrats on your second place win Jan! ; )
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 4:51 PM
I submitted another poem but changed it for this one - so glad Andrea liked the humour lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Congratulations on this high flying win, Jan...and on your positive learning progress...a determination to better yourself! Haiku are not at all easy, but you did great. hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 4:51 PM
Thanks Paul - i do struggle with the final line in haiku/senryu - just had fun with this one:-) hugs Jan xx
Devnath  Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 1:41 PM
Lol, i dream a heaven of roses at night. Congrats my lovely friend for your beautiful placement. Loved always, bl
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Thanks BL:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 11:04 AM
.Congrats on a great win Jan
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 5:20 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poems, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Thanks Anne lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Misra Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 11:33 PM
You may dream of roses, but your nose knows! Beautiful... Congrats, Jan. ~karam~
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 4:53 PM
lol thanks Karam:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 5:49 PM
The title is disgusting, but WOW, this is a REAL KU. A Cuckoo KU but I love the humor here, JAn. You got the great twist at the end. you did everything right. BIG congratulations to you.
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 4:54 PM
Thanks Andrea lol - I wonder if you guessed i was the culprit I mean I was the author lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Horne Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 3:14 PM
LMAO - saw the title & had to read this one x
Allison Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Glad you enjoyed Jack:-) I wrote another poem called Poetry Princess which was about Andrea and submitted it to the contest - then thought what the heck I will write one about me and my poetry instead - will be flushed with success if Andrea likes this one lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Konos Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 9:53 AM
I hope you awake from your dream and get the hello out of there!
Allison Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 1:05 PM
LOl I will Judy:-) I think the tide is turning and everything is coming up roses now lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Murray Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 5:08 PM
A scent of roses would be apt after that. Very good Jan.
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 5:23 PM
Definitely Jean lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Rigoler Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Hahaha! Doubtless a sound from personal experience! What a wit you are, Jan! Thanks for the stop at my page. Yes, the period in the States is also called a "full stop." / M
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Glad you enjoyed Maurice - I hope Andrea likes the humour:-) I originally submitted a poem called 'poetry princess' but changed it for this one :-) hugs Jan xx
Kannan Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 5:15 AM
Ha ha.. Very nice
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 6:29 AM
Thanks Supraja:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 11:50 PM
it sure made a splash, haha... a 7 I like it :)
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 4:16 AM
LOL I hope Andrea likes it too :-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 8:35 PM
What depth and beauty, this search for meaning and fulfillment, not to mention the spare roll...
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 8:37 PM
ha ha ha love that comment Charlie:-) Long as I come up smelling of roses in the contest I guess i will be ok lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Severo Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 4:47 PM
haha you always make me smile xoxoxox
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 4:50 PM
Aww thank you Aurore thank you for commenting, it is always lovely to see your beautiful smile:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 4:12 PM
Sounds like my weekend...I was in the toilet according to my daughters...they kept beating my in a game of 4 square...last place was the toilet
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 4:26 PM
Oh dear Tim - not a good place to be lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 4:11 PM
I loved this Jan, because it left me with roses! Haha. Happy Mother's Day belated...as I know you have already had yours. I am sure Andrea will enjoy this. Hugs, Connie ; )
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 4:25 PM
I hope you had a wonderful day Connie - last year I did not get a Mother's Day card from my son - when I made a joke about it he said he has his calendar set to the US Mother's day by accident lol:-) hope you got some roses:-) hugs jan xx
Rycroft Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Ver funny well thought of x
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 3:49 PM
Thanks so much Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx
Manassian Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 3:23 PM
You are a funny one, indeed. ;) Fixated, are we? Good luck in the contest. Crappy poem, indeed! ;) Read your comment below...
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 3:27 PM
I'm queen of poop lol just hope Andrea likes it lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Chircop Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Hehe : ) Love this one and needed it.Poop ploop : ). HAPPY MOTHER' S DAY DEAR Jan.
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Thanks Charma - it's not Mother's Day here - ours was in March - but who need's an excuse to celebrate:-) hugs jan xx
Ebbs Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 1:00 PM
LOL, cute :)
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 1:05 PM
Thanks Ed - I have changed my contest entry to this one - hope Andrea likes the humour lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 12:32 PM
- Small and big dreams ........ :) - Love it, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 12:38 PM
I have gone out on a limb on this one - hope Andrea likes it as my other poem was a tribute to her but will got with my 'gut' instinct lol:-) hugs jan xx
Babbit Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 12:29 PM
Too cute.
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 12:33 PM
I'm having a pop at myself here DM - will take the plunge and put it in the contest - if I add another n/a to my enormous collection so be it :-) hugs Jan xx
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