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toilet humour it’s a splash in the can I dream of roses modern Senryu 4,6,5 syllables Contest Short form Poetry Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich 05~08~16

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 5/18/2016 3:31:00 PM

Hi Jan. Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 4:49:00 PM

Thanks Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/17/2016 1:31:00 AM

Congrats Jan to win on the cute senryu

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 4:50:00 PM

Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/15/2016 7:21:00 PM

I think you are one of the few who can write about this subject and make it sound appealing! Lol. Back to give you congrats on your second place win Jan! ; )

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 4:51:00 PM

I submitted another poem but changed it for this one - so glad Andrea liked the humour lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 5/15/2016 3:57:00 PM

Congratulations on this high flying win, Jan...and on your positive learning progress...a determination to better yourself! Haiku are not at all easy, but you did great. hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 4:51:00 PM

Thanks Paul - i do struggle with the final line in haiku/senryu - just had fun with this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/15/2016 1:41:00 PM

Lol, i dream a heaven of roses at night. Congrats my lovely friend for your beautiful placement. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 4:52:00 PM

Thanks BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 5/15/2016 11:04:00 AM

.Congrats on a great win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 4:52:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2016 5:20:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 4:53:00 PM

Thanks Anne lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Karam Misra

Date: 5/14/2016 11:33:00 PM

You may dream of roses, but your nose knows! Beautiful... Congrats, Jan. ~karam~

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 4:53:00 PM

lol thanks Karam:-) hugs Jan xx

Rob Carmack

Date: 5/14/2016 8:56:00 PM

Congrats Jan. Perseverance, like on the can, eventually usually pays off.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 4:54:00 PM

Thanks Rob:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2016 5:49:00 PM

The title is disgusting, but WOW, this is a REAL KU. A Cuckoo KU but I love the humor here, JAn. You got the great twist at the end. you did everything right. BIG congratulations to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 4:54:00 PM

Thanks Andrea lol - I wonder if you guessed i was the culprit I mean I was the author lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 5/10/2016 3:14:00 PM

LMAO - saw the title & had to read this one x

Jan Allison
Date: 5/10/2016 4:39:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed Jack:-) I wrote another poem called Poetry Princess which was about Andrea and submitted it to the contest - then thought what the heck I will write one about me and my poetry instead - will be flushed with success if Andrea likes this one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 5/10/2016 9:53:00 AM

I hope you awake from your dream and get the hello out of there!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/10/2016 1:05:00 PM

LOl I will Judy:-) I think the tide is turning and everything is coming up roses now lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 5/9/2016 5:08:00 PM

A scent of roses would be apt after that. Very good Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/9/2016 5:23:00 PM

Definitely Jean lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 5/9/2016 8:55:00 AM

Hahaha! Doubtless a sound from personal experience! What a wit you are, Jan! Thanks for the stop at my page. Yes, the period in the States is also called a "full stop." / M

Jan Allison
Date: 5/9/2016 8:57:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed Maurice - I hope Andrea likes the humour:-) I originally submitted a poem called 'poetry princess' but changed it for this one :-) hugs Jan xx

Supraja Kannan

Date: 5/9/2016 5:15:00 AM

Ha ha.. Very nice

Jan Allison
Date: 5/9/2016 6:29:00 AM

Thanks Supraja:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 5/8/2016 11:50:00 PM

it sure made a splash, haha... a 7 I like it :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/9/2016 4:16:00 AM

LOL I hope Andrea likes it too :-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/8/2016 8:35:00 PM

What depth and beauty, this search for meaning and fulfillment, not to mention the spare roll...

Jan Allison
Date: 5/8/2016 8:37:00 PM

ha ha ha love that comment Charlie:-) Long as I come up smelling of roses in the contest I guess i will be ok lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Aurore Severo

Date: 5/8/2016 4:47:00 PM

haha you always make me smile xoxoxox

Jan Allison
Date: 5/8/2016 4:50:00 PM

Aww thank you Aurore thank you for commenting, it is always lovely to see your beautiful smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/8/2016 4:12:00 PM

Sounds like my weekend...I was in the toilet according to my daughters...they kept beating my in a game of 4 square...last place was the toilet

Jan Allison
Date: 5/8/2016 4:26:00 PM

Oh dear Tim - not a good place to be lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/8/2016 4:11:00 PM

I loved this Jan, because it left me with roses! Haha. Happy Mother's Day belated...as I know you have already had yours. I am sure Andrea will enjoy this. Hugs, Connie ; )

Jan Allison
Date: 5/8/2016 4:25:00 PM

I hope you had a wonderful day Connie - last year I did not get a Mother's Day card from my son - when I made a joke about it he said he has his calendar set to the US Mother's day by accident lol:-) hope you got some roses:-) hugs jan xx

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 5/8/2016 3:33:00 PM

Ver funny well thought of x

Jan Allison
Date: 5/8/2016 3:49:00 PM

Thanks so much Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/8/2016 3:23:00 PM

You are a funny one, indeed. ;) Fixated, are we? Good luck in the contest. Crappy poem, indeed! ;) Read your comment below...

Jan Allison
Date: 5/8/2016 3:27:00 PM

I'm queen of poop lol just hope Andrea likes it lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/8/2016 1:40:00 PM

Hehe : ) Love this one and needed it.Poop ploop : ). HAPPY MOTHER' S DAY DEAR Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/8/2016 1:54:00 PM

Thanks Charma - it's not Mother's Day here - ours was in March - but who need's an excuse to celebrate:-) hugs jan xx

Edward Ebbs

Date: 5/8/2016 1:00:00 PM

LOL, cute :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/8/2016 1:05:00 PM

Thanks Ed - I have changed my contest entry to this one - hope Andrea likes the humour lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2016 12:32:00 PM

- Small and big dreams ........ :) - Love it, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/8/2016 12:38:00 PM

I have gone out on a limb on this one - hope Andrea likes it as my other poem was a tribute to her but will got with my 'gut' instinct lol:-) hugs jan xx