Poetry Palace Now Open For Tourists--Beware

Peek, if you dare…inside my Palace of CREATIVITY
Observe my drafty walls, and rhyming dungeons                                     ^^
Enter, my friends, with no delusions!                                             ^^
There are marbled halls of mass confusion… 
Regarding your ILLUSION, of metaphoric INFUSIONs,… 
Your opinions may falter, upon the alter, compared to other verses                ^^

                                                                                                  ^^
Poetic attempts, and past regrets, are ghostly curses
And with INEVITABLE blunders, they rattle off meter, the echos could haunt you!
Lest you dare, just beware, dear readers….  WATCH YOUR STEP!                          ^^
As your guide, I’ll confide….people have died!
'Cause this Poetry Palace, has bats in the belfry! (As everyone knows)…
EVENTUALLY, this palace place should be foreclosed! 
   

For Linda Marie’s Contest “Poetry Palace”
By Carrie Richards

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/22/2011 8:42:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your fabulous win in the 'poetry palace' contest...Love, gautami
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:07:00 PM
A super imagination Carrie. many congrats.
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Date: 5/19/2011 6:31:00 PM
This is a wonderful write Carrie !Congrats on your 2nd place win.
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Date: 5/19/2011 3:43:00 PM
Good one..Congratulations...Sara
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Date: 5/19/2011 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:58:00 AM
nice job. congrats on your win./cory
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:21:00 AM
Great poem and I loved the line aout "bats in the belfry," Carrie. Congratulations on your win in the Poetry Palace contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2011 4:25:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of linda, Carrie
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Date: 5/19/2011 3:29:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Carrie : )
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Date: 5/19/2011 2:41:00 AM
it's magic! super cheers for the glowing win, carrie.:) huggs
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Date: 5/18/2011 9:05:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your second place win in my contest with this creative write... thankxx always for your constant support luv..
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Date: 5/18/2011 10:30:00 AM
I would love to see a video made for this poem...Amazing!!! Very creative and amusing. Nice Job Carrie.
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Date: 5/17/2011 11:45:00 AM
An excellent write Carrie.Enjoyed.Thanks for your warming words at my pages....
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:53:00 AM
I dared to peek inside and found something wonderful. Nice
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Date: 5/15/2011 10:58:00 PM
Hi Carrie. This is a haunted castle...nice! Love the inevitable blunders that rattle of meter and the haunting echoes..sweeet descriptions...oh my, and people have died? SCary! Best of luck with this poem...I saw your pics of Lassen...where is that located? Looks amazingly gorgeous. And I love where your inspiration to write comes from...what great poetry lineage. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/14/2011 6:09:00 PM
very creative piece brought a smile. sorry it took me so long to get back to you , my internet has been out for over a week. thank you for reading night train whistle and for your comment.
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Date: 5/14/2011 4:17:00 PM
Enjoyed this one..Got a chuckle..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Reads like a winner for the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2011 2:32:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL, Carrie, I am sure Linda will love this wonderful poem, I do~~
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Date: 5/14/2011 11:56:00 AM
Linda will short eat this one up with a spoon.... wonderful write Carrie... luv Michael
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