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Poetry In the Clouds

Passing clouds stir the muse As flowers bloom in spring Lilacs sway in the breeze, A haiku stirs within With such enchanting ease Passing clouds stir the muse In blue skies of summer Sonnets in the sunshine, With scenes painted in rhymes, Each stanza so divine Passing clouds stir the muse As autumn leaves fly by With trees adorned in gold, A lyric starts to flow With splendor to unfold Passing clouds stir the muse In winter's somber mood Each season to admire, Then snowflakes start to fall, The poet to inspire 4-4-2022 Form M - Monchielle - New Poetry Contest Theme: Poetry Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 5/1/2022 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations, Joseph, for your win with this outstanding poem. It is truly beautiful and lovely with enchanting images! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 4/25/2022 2:13:00 PM
Lovely. I just felt the breeze of peace blow over my heart, thank you for this beautiful poem of beauty <3 ~BJ
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Date: 4/25/2022 1:39:00 PM
Your beautiful nature poems and Seasons poetry is outstanding. You have a style of your own which is unique and awesome - this one is no exception, well done for your win in Constance's Contest, congratulations my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/17/2022 3:56:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your win in my Monchielle contest ~ Constance
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Joseph May
Date: 4/18/2022 5:30:00 PM
RThank you for my placement Constance
Date: 4/16/2022 4:31:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Joseph May
Date: 4/18/2022 5:28:00 PM
Thank you Sara
Date: 4/15/2022 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Poetry In The Clouds" is a lovely write. Love to find shapes in the clouds. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............
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Joseph May
Date: 4/18/2022 5:28:00 PM
Thank you Paula
Date: 4/14/2022 8:50:00 PM
Great thoughts on poetry. Congratulations!
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Joseph May
Date: 4/18/2022 5:28:00 PM
Thank you CA
Date: 4/10/2022 3:34:00 AM
Ah! You write about the seasons with such ease and beauty, Joseph, outstanding:)
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Joseph May
Date: 4/10/2022 6:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Jo
Date: 4/7/2022 11:02:00 AM
I enjoyed this beautiful poem Joseph :)
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Joseph May
Date: 4/10/2022 6:32:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Heidi, Thank you
Date: 4/6/2022 7:49:00 PM
As clouds drift through the tender blue, they lightly lift me and you. This is beautiful in every way. I am smiling and floating, all at the same time, and I'm placing this in my favorites. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Joseph May
Date: 4/10/2022 6:32:00 AM
Thank you for making it a fave Brandy, Hugs
Date: 4/6/2022 7:27:00 AM
Wonderful ! I love taking this journey through the seasons with passing clouds an inspiration for your muse . Love it . Susan :)
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Joseph May
Date: 4/10/2022 6:30:00 AM
Thank you Susan, Its a nice journey
Date: 4/5/2022 7:15:00 PM
Wow that is gorgeous. This will be a fun form when I try it
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Joseph May
Date: 4/10/2022 6:29:00 AM
Yes it is fun Andrea, Thank you
Date: 4/4/2022 8:48:00 AM
Exceptionally fine writing, Joseph. This form isn't easy, but you have certainly mastered it. Very enjoyable.
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Joseph May
Date: 4/10/2022 6:29:00 AM
It is a great form, Thank you Milton
Date: 4/4/2022 8:33:00 AM
Great depiction of the seasons. I have never tried this type of poem You did well. Best for a win.
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Joseph May
Date: 4/10/2022 6:28:00 AM
Thank you Victor
Date: 4/4/2022 5:24:00 AM
Enjoyed the ride with you through the seasons, Joseph. No doubt a winning poem.
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Joseph May
Date: 4/4/2022 7:07:00 AM
Thank you Vijay
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Joseph May
Date: 4/4/2022 7:00:00 AM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 4/4/2022 4:55:00 AM
A poet exults in all the fleeting changes in nature and the muse in him wakes up to every scene and sound. Beautifully composed, dear friend !
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Joseph May
Date: 4/4/2022 5:18:00 AM
So true Valsa, Thank you
Date: 4/4/2022 3:35:00 AM
Nothing beats the seasons to stir the muse Joseph, artists use a brush us poets use a pen. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your week. Tom
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Joseph May
Date: 4/4/2022 5:17:00 AM
The seasons are full of inspiration, Thank you Tom
Date: 4/4/2022 3:13:00 AM
Clouds pass as do the seasons and in each one a muse discovers a reason to write. Nicely done, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 4/4/2022 3:15:00 AM
Thank you Jenna, Love your rhyming comment..

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