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Poetry Forest


Come my beauty, I am the voice of the forest,
      Just take my mossy hand and come my dearest;
With love you will be embraced by emerald vines,
            Listen to the birds sing, oh what a sweet chorus.

And in ancient towering trees the wild wind whines,
      On hanging branches tangled moss falls and twines;
Let us take this path, see the sage unfolding ferns,
            Not far, my dear, a creek bubbles like sweet chimes.

Come my darling, be careful of those wild rose thorns,
      A colorful bright hummingbird twirls, swirls and turns;
To hear my whisper, that has always been your "choice",
            I know you love me,  since childhood this love burns.

The forest is within your heart and I am the sweet voice,
      And in your dream dear, I called and you came by choice;
You love my green deepness, my peace, and tranquility,
            So until it is time to wake, be still and just rejoice.

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April 30, 2016

Poetry/Rubaiyat/Forest
Copyright Protected, ID 16-784-237-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, Poetry (Fill in the Blank)
sponsor, Poet Destroyer 

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 6:40 AM
Beautiful, divine, brilliant, whole..... Congrats BW, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Love the call of the forest. Lovely!
Williams Gault Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 7:21 AM
This certainly was a beautifully tranquil visit. Congratulations on your win!
May Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:38 PM
Enchanting...Congrats on a fine win BW
Davey Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 9:34 PM
Very beautiful write Constance and congrats on your placement
Devnath  Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely beautiful poetess friend. Earlier missed to read, sorry. Loved always, bl
La France Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 12:09 PM
BL thanks for visiting my poem and for the nice comment and congratulations
Haight Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 8:40 AM
So lovely and soothing, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win. 7 Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Sandra thanks for the beautiful comment and congratulations
A   Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 1:06 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome Poetry POEM win. Stop by my blog "POETRY THERAPY." if you'd like... Thank you always for being so supportive when it comes to my contest. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
La France Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Linda thanks for the beautiful contest and for my wonderful placement
James Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 2:32 PM
lovely write.. i see your imagery. 7 for sure
La France Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 3:20 PM
James, thanks for the lovely and the 7 ~
Cheema Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 3:41 AM
Your imageries, emotions and words forever hold me spellbound, Constance!
La France Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Balveen, thanks for visiting my poem today and for the nice comment
Salehi Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 3:09 PM
Beautiful... I should call you Ms. Omar Khayyam.
Salehi Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Always my dear......you should try this more often. Come my beauty, I am the voice of the forest,........Pashang
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:25 PM
Pash, thanks for visiting with the beautiful
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 1:52 PM
- Beautiful written B.W. ..... a 7 ! - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:25 PM
Anne, thanks for the beautiful and hugs
Mcconnell Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Rather enjoyable piece Constance, great imagery and insightful thought too, well done!
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:26 PM
Gordon, thanks for the compliments !
Inman Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 10:44 AM
This is wonderful BW. Ethereal and dreamy.
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:27 PM
James, I love those words ethereal and dreamy ~
Stebbings Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 9:12 AM
Wow, so sensual. Beautiful written, definitely a 7.
La France Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Barry, thanks for the compliment...
Gupta Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 9:23 PM
A beautiful forest to look at, listen, live in and love on....
La France Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Probir, thanks for the beautiful and the comment ~
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