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I used to write, a spoken heart some would call me My pen was my bestfriend, she never left me Her ink would speak on my souls behalf, my heart had a voice then Many tears fell at her side, ink and pain she portrayed Yet many verses came and went, some of love, some of pain her voice all the same I cant help but look into a womans eyes and dare to gaze into her life Women speak with their eyes, their scent that captures the point of beauty in a man Their soft hair, golden brown to cherry black and i fall to imagine which one i will marry Women are the flowers of Gods garden beautiful beyond imagination They inspire the wild heart of mine to spit verse after verse I am Romeo Any woman whose eyes lay upon these humble words of spoken truth Know you are beautiful...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/6/2019 10:19:00 AM
Lovely! Thanks for the compliment! Lol. I'm going to follow you!
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Date: 1/22/2013 12:30:00 PM
Her ink would speak on my soul's behalf . . . I LOVE that line. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks so much for sharing it. m
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Date: 12/24/2012 8:40:00 PM
Edward, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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Date: 9/8/2012 10:08:00 AM
awesome write Edward. enjoy reading it tonight..thanks for your great share:) luv SK
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:02:00 AM
Very beautiful these words which flow from soul to heart,from heart to pen and from pen to paper..Charma
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Date: 2/18/2012 4:22:00 PM
"My pen was my best friend...." I think it has helped many who are lonely to writing poem on PSoup. - As you say "she" (the pen) never left me" - It is a lovely poem Edward. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Edward Orozco
Date: 2/18/2012 4:54:00 PM
Very true. =) thank u for reading my work Anne truly my heart is at my pens side.
Date: 2/18/2012 12:33:00 PM
i love this!!! it's saying a lot too since i usually like poems that rhyme, but your poem captured my interest in the first line. :)
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Edward Orozco
Date: 2/18/2012 4:53:00 PM
thank u for reading my work =) Linda... did u know ur name means pretty in spanish? ;)

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