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8.58pm July 24,2024

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sculptured 
soulful words
are our endless streams
quenching mountains and plains’ thirst
as golden pens glut the barren lands with songs

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Brian Sambourne

August 18, 2024 at 6:01 AM

Remarkable alliteration, Len. The 5th line calls forth such a strong image. Congratulations on your win. Best wishes, Brian

Karen Croft

August 1, 2024 at 3:08 AM

A beautiful write!

Paula Goldsmith

July 30, 2024 at 10:49 AM

I did not know you won on this one. Congratulations on your wonderful win. I enjoyed reading your "Poetry" write. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Len Gasun

August 17, 2024 at 6:54 PM

Belated thank you for reading my poem, your congratulatory greetings and your inspirting words my dear peot friend. Have a blessed day writing away too! Hugs

Crystol Woods

July 27, 2024 at 10:49 AM

Hi! Congratulations to you for a top win! Beautifully contrived! Xo

Len Gasun

July 28, 2024 at 5:47 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging words and warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Crystol. I got second place here. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Joe Maverick

July 26, 2024 at 11:08 PM

A riot of imaginative discriptive here Len' You have filled the page and thought of the Reader.' So well expressed.)

Len Gasun

July 28, 2024 at 5:46 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your words of enouragement my dear poet friend Joe. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Joe Maverick

July 26, 2024 at 11:08 PM

A riot of imaginative discriptive here Len You have filled the page and thought of the Reader.' So well expressed.)

Len Gasun

July 28, 2024 at 5:45 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your words of encouragement my dear poet friend Joe. Blessings to you always and your writings .Hugs

Len Gasun

July 26, 2024 at 9:11 PM

9 is not PRIME Contest Judged: 7/24/2024 11:05:00 AM Sponsored by: Suzette Richards Pace 2 ( 1-10 single w & multi-HM)

Andrea Dietrich

July 25, 2024 at 2:20 PM

Wow did you get top win? This is awesome. Congrats

Len Gasun

July 26, 2024 at 7:01 PM

Thank you my dear poet friend Andrea for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

I Am Anaya

July 25, 2024 at 8:50 AM

Beautiful, Len congratulations on your top win! xhugs

Len Gasun

July 25, 2024 at 9:48 AM

Thanks for reading my poem, your uplifting words and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend. God bless you always and your writings. Congrats as well. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues

July 25, 2024 at 6:31 AM

Very nice! Congrats!

Len Gasun

July 25, 2024 at 9:49 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting comment and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Kim God bless you always and your writings. Congrats as well! Hugs

Sara Kendrick

July 25, 2024 at 6:09 AM

Very nice winner. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K

Len Gasun

July 25, 2024 at 9:51 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your congratulatory greetings and your uplifting comment my dear poet friend. Congrats to you as well. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Terry Miller

July 25, 2024 at 3:09 AM

Beautiful entry into the competition, congratulations

Len Gasun

July 26, 2024 at 7:03 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem my dear poet friend Terry, your uplifting comments and congratulatory greetings. Go bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Beata Agustin

July 24, 2024 at 9:50 PM

Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this muse of yours... delightful and delighting. God bless you.

Len Gasun

July 25, 2024 at 9:17 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Beata. God bless you too and hope/pray that you and your family are safe from Carina's devastation. Stay safe always. Hugs

Regina Mcintosh

July 24, 2024 at 8:30 PM

Beautiful write. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina

Len Gasun

July 25, 2024 at 9:15 AM

Thank you so mych for reading, your inspiring words and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend. Congratulations as well on you first place win! God bless you always and your writings. Hugs