Poetry - Ziket

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the ziket is a new poetry form invented by Dr Zik (Dr Zafar Iqbal Khokhar) from Pakistan
2 lines : 1st line is 5-8 syllables, 2nd line is 5 syllables

whispers in the night tickled pen takes flight Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~SEEKING PEACE OF MIND~ 2020 AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on July 11, 2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/17/2020 2:28:00 AM

I like this very much. Do the Ziket lines have to rhyme or is that a perk and an option?

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/11/2020 3:16:00 PM

Ooh I love this. xomo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/11/2020 9:53:00 PM

Thanks, Maureen, much appreciated ~

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/11/2020 11:03:00 AM

Hello Lin Gauthier, a beautiful scene with the moon. Shoeing purple and green colours. in the dark water.Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/12/2020 2:46:00 PM

Hello Lin Gauthier, you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/11/2020 9:54:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene. Much appreciated ~