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Jcb Bruhl's First Poem was Born Contest ~ 12/7/24

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poetry contest in a children's magazine about the planets I wrote a galaxy ball held in the celestial sky the sun arrived first followed by all nine planets wearing fine costumes published with illustrations my poetic wings took flight

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2024 12:27:00 PM

So creative! Congrats, Lin.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/14/2024 8:05:00 PM

A very thrilling experience, indeed! Congratulations!

JCB Brul

Date: 12/13/2024 12:36:00 AM

What a unique execution of your poetic beginning. Thank you for sharing. Congratulations and stay creative! ^__^ JCB

Karen Jones

Date: 12/12/2024 6:55:00 PM

Love this!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/11/2024 11:15:00 AM

Lin, I am certain it was a wonderful dance and costume ball. It's nice to remember what got you started on this journey and have a chance to reminisce. You've come a long way since then. You're creating one heck of a set of work in this space!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/7/2024 4:39:00 PM

oh wow Lin and you certainly are flying high on your poetic wings, you are SO SO talented my friend and wrote poetry from a young age, i stumbled into writing by accident lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Yolanda Joy Nicholsen

Date: 12/7/2024 2:09:00 PM

This is awesome I adore your poetic wings many blessings

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2024 11:34:00 AM

- I can't remember the title or theme of my first newspaper published poems... many, many years ago (before my first computer)... and they no longer exist... I've moved so many times that they've been lost - Great written, Lin :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a happy weekend :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/7/2024 8:58:00 AM

It's amazing how we all remember our first poem, like our first kiss lol. Good luck Lin. Tom

John Read

Date: 12/7/2024 7:29:00 AM

Hi Lin, long may you poetic flight continue, wish you well in the contest. xx

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2024 8:32:00 AM

Thank you very much, John.