Notes About The Poem

Poetic Promises

Blushing hopes whisper 
Caressing my mind, my feelings
With echoes of smiles
Brilliant and vibrant
Illuminating my life with laughter
Kindness so wise and strong
It blends joy and faith 
With a dusting of love

Starlight twinkles lavender
Healing all sorrows and loss
With words both warm
And eternally glowing
Softening the darkness
With a sense of wispy energy
Music longing for the moment
When all hearts sing and dance
With pleasure that lasts

Hues of a tangerine sun
Melt the dreams hesitations
With miracles in everlasting verse
Poems so alive they vibrate
Drinking liquid words through straws
Created from the afterbirth
Of joy and passion, inspirations
Sparkling so they brighten the heart
Healing, fulfilling, freeing
Teaching through living that affection
Enlightens and thrills, compels
The breath of a shattered tear
To linger on the flesh
Rippling with gestures of grace

These visions prompt my thoughts
To listen to the voice of God
Who knows my depths, my soul
In ways that I can only fathom
Directing me, dissecting me
Coloring me in shadow and light
Prayers so aware they caress me
With songs in scarlet and cobalt
Sighs so gentle they soothe
Even the flickers of sorrow or regret
Captivating the nature of rhymes
Held in the clutches of a art
So heartening it betrays the crusty
Clutching of a massive moon
Who wants to awaken the truth
Found inside one who knows
Affection flows from the dewy
Petals of a rose who blooms
Promises and praises, prayers
Spent within the empty pages
Of a lonely pen who is mending
Even the haunting nightmares
Of one who listens and stills
Their thoughts for a moment

When the Poet’s hands are tied





June 2, 2021
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Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings.............
La France Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 12:11 PM
Gina, beautiful writing and congratulations on your win, peace _Constance
Merryman Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 6:30 PM
Beautiful, creative imagery! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Mchattie Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 5:30 PM
Wow. This is so good on so many levels. You must have been wearing your creative pants on this one. One of the best I've ever read. Superb. Have a great day.
Seeker Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 8:40 PM
Step aside folks! Enjoy this winning write!
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