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Honey vapour scents travelled among seduced tepid zephyrs.
This was not a dream for I was within the realms of reality,
as fate's footsteps led my heart back to forgotten pastures.
Her persona was poetic personification, yet I was lost for words,
so in simple silence, souls serenaded suppressed symphonies.
The idyllic radiance of her eyes became a timeless memory,
the warmth of our first kiss an eternal celestial connection.

Silent One
21 June 2018

Example for seven lines of romantic heaven poetry contest

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 9/21/2019 11:56:00 PM

Stunning!

James Inman

Date: 10/10/2018 7:54:00 AM

A lovely write Silent One

Carole Duet

Date: 7/13/2018 12:07:00 AM

Love this one...perfection....if only we could relive those perfect moments.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 6/29/2018 3:40:00 PM

Hi Silent, one could put down so many superlatives on this poetic piece. Your pen does spread its golden ink and pure excellence is layed before us. You take the heart upwards with such gentleness. I could read this gem over and over. This is a definite fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Judy Ball

Date: 6/25/2018 4:22:00 PM

The words are soft and melodic. So romantic. Truly inspiring. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Carole Duet

Date: 6/25/2018 2:33:00 PM

So lovely, ZZ. What a romantic scene this paints in my imagination! Poetic juice....mmm GL in the contest.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/25/2018 3:15:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely and very romantic write. Enjoyed reading it.

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/25/2018 12:43:00 AM

My friend, when you spill romantic ink, it glows a radiant color and brings precious memories from readers that have had such treasure. This is without doubt another example of your poetic talent and deep insight. A fav my good friend. A glistening gem!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/24/2018 2:27:00 PM

How beautiful this is Silent One...Definitely connects with the reader.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/24/2018 10:59:00 AM

Lovely and romantic. Good luck in the contest, SO.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/23/2018 3:10:00 AM

a WOW poem... URGENT SOUPIE FOR YOU, S.O!... huggs

Nette Onclaud
Date: 6/23/2018 4:04:00 AM

ohh, and thanks lots!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2018 7:41:00 PM

Beautiful, Silent One, and thanks for my win in your last contest.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/21/2018 6:21:00 PM

So sweet! So nice! So dignified!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/21/2018 6:21:00 PM

So sweet! So nice! So dignified!

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/21/2018 4:23:00 PM

A joy to read, and again.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/21/2018 3:41:00 PM

back in love again... alk the best SO

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/21/2018 2:46:00 PM

She sounds like a dream, even though your thoughts whisper reality. Moments are beautiful, as silence touches the heart. ~ Maia

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/21/2018 2:20:00 PM

This heart-shaped ink spill drips w/pure romance, SO. Love that cool alliteration line: ... so in simple silence, souls serenaded suppressed symphonies. Such a creative force of nature is your soft quill. So good to read your thoughts again, my dear friend. Sophisticated elegant poetry. Love and more love always.

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/21/2018 1:35:00 PM

What heavenly pleasures you evoke from your romantic pen, Silent! A lovely piece to behold! Enjoyed:)

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/21/2018 12:29:00 PM

A heavenly love in real life you amazed Silent One to carve it into poetic lines! When line seven embraces heaven! You have a wonderful flair for outshining words! A FAV. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and blessed.