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Honey vapour scents travelled among seduced tepid zephyrs. This was not a dream for I was within the realms of reality, as fate's footsteps led my heart back to forgotten pastures. Her persona was poetic personification, yet I was lost for words, so in simple silence, souls serenaded suppressed symphonies. The idyllic radiance of her eyes became a timeless memory, the warmth of our first kiss an eternal celestial connection.
Silent One 21 June 2018 Example for seven lines of romantic heaven poetry contest

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Date: 10/10/2018 7:54:00 AM
A lovely write Silent One
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Date: 7/13/2018 12:07:00 AM
Love this one...perfection....if only we could relive those perfect moments.
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Date: 6/29/2018 3:40:00 PM
Hi Silent, one could put down so many superlatives on this poetic piece. Your pen does spread its golden ink and pure excellence is layed before us. You take the heart upwards with such gentleness. I could read this gem over and over. This is a definite fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 6/26/2018 3:15:00 AM
Silent One, forget Belinda Carlisle, this scrumptious tidbit was heavenly! Like John exiled to the isle of Patmos, after being boiled in oil, only to behold the vision of the New Jersalem descending to earth as a jewel adorned for the bride. D.R.M.F.
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Date: 6/26/2018 12:36:00 AM
A splendid, romantic verse beautifully written, Silent One. I love in particular the line "so in simple silence, souls serenaded suppressed symphonies". T.J
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Date: 6/25/2018 4:22:00 PM
The words are soft and melodic. So romantic. Truly inspiring. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:33:00 PM
So lovely, ZZ. What a romantic scene this paints in my imagination! Poetic juice....mmm GL in the contest.
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Date: 6/25/2018 3:15:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely and very romantic write. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 6/25/2018 12:43:00 AM
My friend, when you spill romantic ink, it glows a radiant color and brings precious memories from readers that have had such treasure. This is without doubt another example of your poetic talent and deep insight. A fav my good friend. A glistening gem!
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Date: 6/24/2018 2:27:00 PM
How beautiful this is Silent One...Definitely connects with the reader.
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Date: 6/24/2018 10:59:00 AM
Lovely and romantic. Good luck in the contest, SO.
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Date: 6/23/2018 3:10:00 AM
a WOW poem... URGENT SOUPIE FOR YOU, S.O!... huggs
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Date: 6/23/2018 4:04:00 AM
ohh, and thanks lots!
Date: 6/21/2018 7:41:00 PM
Beautiful, Silent One, and thanks for my win in your last contest.
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:21:00 PM
So sweet! So nice! So dignified!
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:21:00 PM
So sweet! So nice! So dignified!
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Date: 6/21/2018 4:23:00 PM
A joy to read, and again.
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Date: 6/21/2018 3:41:00 PM
back in love again... alk the best SO
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Date: 6/21/2018 2:46:00 PM
She sounds like a dream, even though your thoughts whisper reality. Moments are beautiful, as silence touches the heart. ~ Maia
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Date: 6/21/2018 2:20:00 PM
This heart-shaped ink spill drips w/pure romance, SO. Love that cool alliteration line: ... so in simple silence, souls serenaded suppressed symphonies. Such a creative force of nature is your soft quill. So good to read your thoughts again, my dear friend. Sophisticated elegant poetry. Love and more love always.
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Date: 6/21/2018 1:35:00 PM
What heavenly pleasures you evoke from your romantic pen, Silent! A lovely piece to behold! Enjoyed:)
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Date: 6/21/2018 12:29:00 PM
A heavenly love in real life you amazed Silent One to carve it into poetic lines! When line seven embraces heaven! You have a wonderful flair for outshining words! A FAV. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and blessed.
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Date: 6/21/2018 12:28:00 PM
A superb piece with a meaningful song. I'm moved!
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Date: 6/21/2018 9:43:00 AM
Still churning out the masterpieces. Very romantic and the alliteration makes this a very entertaining read. Nicely penned old friend:)
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Date: 6/21/2018 8:56:00 AM
Silent, I LOVE your poem and the song is perfect , great example
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Date: 6/21/2018 8:49:00 AM
Beautifully written Silent One, heavenly romantic perfection. Hugs
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