Silent One Poet Romanticism

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Poetic Personification

Honey vapour scents travelled among seduced tepid zephyrs.
This was not a dream for I was within the realms of reality,
as fate's footsteps led my heart back to forgotten pastures.
Her persona was poetic personification, yet I was lost for words,
so in simple silence, souls serenaded suppressed symphonies.
The idyllic radiance of her eyes became a timeless memory,
the warmth of our first kiss an eternal celestial connection.

Silent One
21 June 2018

Example for seven lines of romantic heaven poetry contest

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Juliet Ligon September 21, 2019 at 11:56 PM Stunning!

James Inman October 10, 2018 at 7:54 AM A lovely write Silent One

Carole Duet July 13, 2018 at 12:07 AM Love this one...perfection....if only we could relive those perfect moments.

Vladislav Raven June 29, 2018 at 3:40 PM Hi Silent, one could put down so many superlatives on this poetic piece. Your pen does spread its golden ink and pure excellence is layed before us. You take the heart upwards with such gentleness. I could read this gem over and over. This is a definite fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Judy Ball June 25, 2018 at 4:22 PM The words are soft and melodic. So romantic. Truly inspiring. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Carole Duet June 25, 2018 at 2:33 PM So lovely, ZZ. What a romantic scene this paints in my imagination! Poetic juice....mmm GL in the contest.

Ravi Sathasivam June 25, 2018 at 3:15 AM Excellent. Lovely and very romantic write. Enjoyed reading it.

Robert Lindley June 25, 2018 at 12:43 AM My friend, when you spill romantic ink, it glows a radiant color and brings precious memories from readers that have had such treasure. This is without doubt another example of your poetic talent and deep insight. A fav my good friend. A glistening gem!

Charmaine Chircop June 24, 2018 at 2:27 PM How beautiful this is Silent One...Definitely connects with the reader.

Eileen Manassian June 24, 2018 at 10:59 AM Lovely and romantic. Good luck in the contest, SO.

Nette Onclaud June 23, 2018 at 3:10 AM a WOW poem... URGENT SOUPIE FOR YOU, S.O!... huggs Nette Onclaud June 23, 2018 at 4:04 AM ohh, and thanks lots!

Andrea Dietrich June 21, 2018 at 7:41 PM Beautiful, Silent One, and thanks for my win in your last contest.

Anisha Dutta June 21, 2018 at 6:21 PM So sweet! So nice! So dignified!

Anisha Dutta June 21, 2018 at 6:21 PM So sweet! So nice! So dignified!

Harry Horsman June 21, 2018 at 4:23 PM A joy to read, and again.

Arturo Michael June 21, 2018 at 3:41 PM back in love again... alk the best SO

Brandy Nicole June 21, 2018 at 2:46 PM She sounds like a dream, even though your thoughts whisper reality. Moments are beautiful, as silence touches the heart. ~ Maia

Freddie Robinson Jr. June 21, 2018 at 2:20 PM This heart-shaped ink spill drips w/pure romance, SO. Love that cool alliteration line: ... so in simple silence, souls serenaded suppressed symphonies. Such a creative force of nature is your soft quill. So good to read your thoughts again, my dear friend. Sophisticated elegant poetry. Love and more love always.

Laura Leiser June 21, 2018 at 1:35 PM What heavenly pleasures you evoke from your romantic pen, Silent! A lovely piece to behold! Enjoyed:)

Besma Riabi Dziri June 21, 2018 at 12:29 PM A heavenly love in real life you amazed Silent One to carve it into poetic lines! When line seven embraces heaven! You have a wonderful flair for outshining words! A FAV. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and blessed.

Moon Flower June 21, 2018 at 12:28 PM A superb piece with a meaningful song. I'm moved!

Daniel Turner June 21, 2018 at 9:43 AM Still churning out the masterpieces. Very romantic and the alliteration makes this a very entertaining read. Nicely penned old friend:)

Constance La France June 21, 2018 at 8:56 AM Silent, I LOVE your poem and the song is perfect , great example

Cecilia Macfarlane June 21, 2018 at 8:49 AM Beautifully written Silent One, heavenly romantic perfection. Hugs

Heidi Sands June 21, 2018 at 8:18 AM Beautifully written SO :)

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