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When bright art may show the calm dreams of old. Would let my chimera loose in the light. Use of dyed clay for cast beyond threshold. When songs are heard in ears with each heart byte. The whole audience was throbbing with zeal. Each note alters the sound till charm alights. When choir gets the grace of the human feel. Create a form that soars from ground to sky. Dancing has the option to promptly heal. Then art poems will pull you in my way. I'll delight you with some stanza and rhyme. A type for dreaming where the diction sway. The poetry ends haunts thus a faint mime. It suggests why we live, rather than how. To delve into the human heart and chime Frost said: verse should touch sight, ear, and ego. Where Edgar Poe's sonnets showed his first vow. Written: July 20, 2022 for the Five Stanza Terza Rima Poetry Contest Sponsor: L Milton Hankins.
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Date: 7/23/2022 3:38:00 AM
I simply love Edgar Poe's sonnets, a great poet and author, but i also simply love your poetry also Lasaad, it is written with a heart felt beat, each stroke a beat - beautiful, good luck in the contest. HUGS AND BLESSINGS Jennifer.
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Date: 7/21/2022 11:05:00 AM
This poem is marvelous my friend. I especially resonated with these lines. “When choir gets the grace of the human feel. Create a form that soars from ground to sky.” Really lovely. Blessings xxoo Dancing has the option to promptly heal.
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Date: 7/21/2022 6:11:00 AM
I hear the tenor of your poetic ode my friend and your message in the ending line resonates: verse should touch sight, ear, and ego...
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Date: 7/20/2022 8:47:00 PM
Music and poetry have invincible charms and are possessed with the ability to lift us to great pinnacles of enjoyment ! They can delve deep into human emotions. Great penning dear Lasaad !
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Date: 7/20/2022 8:13:00 PM
Charming message and I like how you matched your poem to the lovely picture.
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