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Poetic Love Affair

Thrusting deep into my soul,
                           again …….and ……again
                   he penetrates with poetic prowess
                    the velvet softness of my dreams.

                      Pounding into pleasure’s pool,
                            HE  R A V I S H E S:
  r~i~p~p~l~i~n~g through me with rhythm ~ and ~ rhyme
                Sublime sensuality in scented syllables
                             I exhale emotions.

            Sated by the secrets of his syntax secretions,
                My pounding heartbeats begin to calm
                        Fisted hands open to palm.

                       The tears of euphoria subside
                                      I HIDE
                            Sweetly safe and sound 

                       In the word haven of his arms

                                Eileen Manassian

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Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/24/2014 5:15:00 PM delightfully piece eileen very beautifully painted Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/23/2014 7:12:00 AM You have surpassed by far romanticism, you have entered the sphere of the sublime! F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C!!! A seven! Login to Reply

Victor Satekge Date: 9/22/2014 2:00:00 PM Wow Eileen, beautiful, I love it. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/22/2014 2:01:00 PM Thanks, Victor. Glad you liked this piece! Thanks for the visit.

Justin Bordner Date: 9/20/2014 6:34:00 PM Oh my goodness Eileen, your passion purrs like a velvet vibration in the arms of his firm flex of sweet protection! This poem rests beautifully in my sense of heroism...awesome embrace, and a super FAV. J.A.B. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/21/2014 2:47:00 PM Justin.....this is why you captivate me! Your posts....I can't get enough of the way you write! Amazing! Yes...I like to purr...but watch out...I also like to ROAR! :) It is an awesome embrace...

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/20/2014 6:00:00 PM Another huge hit on the poetrysoup hot list. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/20/2014 6:04:00 PM Think so? :) Awwwww....thanks a bunch! :)

Tim Smith Date: 9/20/2014 5:37:00 PM Outstanding, sensuous and brilliance all rolled into one..love it...hugs Tim Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/20/2014 5:42:00 PM Hey, Tim. Look time no see! Good to have you stop by and read this little piece!!! Started it while on holiday...Decided to finish it today! Hugs

Arthur Vaso Date: 9/20/2014 4:08:00 PM Finally!!!! You wrote a poem about me!!!!! how sweet! :) hugs Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/20/2014 6:05:00 PM HA HA!!! Oh dear...oh dear! :) You are all such sweet fellas! Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/20/2014 5:57:00 PM You mean its not about me. This is starting to sound like that song "your so vain you probably think this song is about you". I mean Tim and arthur sound like that not me. Eileen Manassian Date: 9/20/2014 5:42:00 PM NOW NOW, boys....it will remain....A MYSTERY!!! Tim Smith Date: 9/20/2014 5:38:00 PM Wait...she told me it was about me !!!!

Bl Devnath Date: 9/20/2014 1:56:00 PM God has given you nice building sense that's clear from this wonderful poem, my lovely friend. Slowly and gradually you have described the rhythm of love of a poet with which poetry is penned. Wonderfully done. Loved always,bl Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/20/2014 6:06:00 PM Thanks, BL...always good to get a visit from you. I've been on holidays for ten days and unable to post except one poem. I'm getting it all out of my system! :)