Poetic Love Affair

Thrusting deep into my soul,
                           again …….and ……again
                   he penetrates with poetic prowess
                    the velvet softness of my dreams.

                      Pounding into pleasure’s pool,
                            HE  R A V I S H E S:
  r~i~p~p~l~i~n~g through me with rhythm ~ and ~ rhyme
                Sublime sensuality in scented syllables
                             I exhale emotions.

            Sated by the secrets of his syntax secretions,
                My pounding heartbeats begin to calm
                        Fisted hands open to palm.

                       The tears of euphoria subside
                                      I HIDE
                            Sweetly safe and sound 

                       In the word haven of his arms

                                Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 5:15 PM
delightfully piece eileen very beautifully painted
Trifiatis Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 7:12 AM
You have surpassed by far romanticism, you have entered the sphere of the sublime! F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C!!! A seven!
Satekge Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 2:00 PM
Wow Eileen, beautiful, I love it.
Manassian Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 2:01 PM
Thanks, Victor. Glad you liked this piece! Thanks for the visit.
Bordner Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 6:34 PM
Oh my goodness Eileen, your passion purrs like a velvet vibration in the arms of his firm flex of sweet protection! This poem rests beautifully in my sense of heroism...awesome embrace, and a super FAV. J.A.B.
Manassian Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 2:47 PM
Justin.....this is why you captivate me! Your posts....I can't get enough of the way you write! Amazing! Yes...I like to purr...but watch out...I also like to ROAR! :) It is an awesome embrace...
Yvonne Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 6:00 PM
Another huge hit on the poetrysoup hot list.
Manassian Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Think so? :) Awwwww....thanks a bunch! :)
Smith Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 5:37 PM
Outstanding, sensuous and brilliance all rolled into one..love it...hugs Tim
Manassian Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 5:42 PM
Hey, Tim. Look time no see! Good to have you stop by and read this little piece!!! Started it while on holiday...Decided to finish it today! Hugs
Vaso Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 4:08 PM
Finally!!!! You wrote a poem about me!!!!! how sweet! :) hugs
Manassian Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 6:05 PM
HA HA!!! Oh dear...oh dear! :) You are all such sweet fellas!
Yvonne Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 5:57 PM
You mean its not about me. This is starting to sound like that song "your so vain you probably think this song is about you". I mean Tim and arthur sound like that not me.
Manassian Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 5:42 PM
NOW NOW, boys....it will remain....A MYSTERY!!!
Smith Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 5:38 PM
Wait...she told me it was about me !!!!
Devnath  Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 1:56 PM
God has given you nice building sense that's clear from this wonderful poem, my lovely friend. Slowly and gradually you have described the rhythm of love of a poet with which poetry is penned. Wonderfully done. Loved always,bl
Manassian Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 6:06 PM
Thanks, BL...always good to get a visit from you. I've been on holidays for ten days and unable to post except one poem. I'm getting it all out of my system! :)
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