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Poetic Love Affair

Thrusting deep into my soul, again …….and ……again he penetrates with poetic prowess the velvet softness of my dreams. Pounding into pleasure’s pool, HE R A V I S H E S: r~i~p~p~l~i~n~g through me with rhythm ~ and ~ rhyme Sublime sensuality in scented syllables I exhale emotions. Sated by the secrets of his syntax secretions, My pounding heartbeats begin to calm Fisted hands open to palm. The tears of euphoria subside I HIDE Sweetly safe and sound In the word haven of his arms Eileen Manassian

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Date: 9/24/2014 5:15:00 PM
delightfully piece eileen very beautifully painted
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Date: 9/23/2014 7:12:00 AM
You have surpassed by far romanticism, you have entered the sphere of the sublime! F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C!!! A seven!
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Date: 9/22/2014 2:00:00 PM
Wow Eileen, beautiful, I love it.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/22/2014 2:01:00 PM
Thanks, Victor. Glad you liked this piece! Thanks for the visit.
Date: 9/20/2014 6:34:00 PM
Oh my goodness Eileen, your passion purrs like a velvet vibration in the arms of his firm flex of sweet protection! This poem rests beautifully in my sense of heroism...awesome embrace, and a super FAV. J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/21/2014 2:47:00 PM
Justin.....this is why you captivate me! Your posts....I can't get enough of the way you write! Amazing! Yes...I like to purr...but watch out...I also like to ROAR! :) It is an awesome embrace...
Date: 9/20/2014 6:00:00 PM
Another huge hit on the poetrysoup hot list.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 6:04:00 PM
Think so? :) Awwwww....thanks a bunch! :)
Date: 9/20/2014 5:37:00 PM
Outstanding, sensuous and brilliance all rolled into one..love it...hugs Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 5:42:00 PM
Hey, Tim. Look time no see! Good to have you stop by and read this little piece!!! Started it while on holiday...Decided to finish it today! Hugs
Date: 9/20/2014 4:08:00 PM
Finally!!!! You wrote a poem about me!!!!! how sweet! :) hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 6:05:00 PM
HA HA!!! Oh dear...oh dear! :) You are all such sweet fellas!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/20/2014 5:57:00 PM
You mean its not about me. This is starting to sound like that song "your so vain you probably think this song is about you". I mean Tim and arthur sound like that not me.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 5:42:00 PM
NOW NOW, boys....it will remain....A MYSTERY!!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/20/2014 5:38:00 PM
Wait...she told me it was about me !!!!
Date: 9/20/2014 1:56:00 PM
God has given you nice building sense that's clear from this wonderful poem, my lovely friend. Slowly and gradually you have described the rhythm of love of a poet with which poetry is penned. Wonderfully done. Loved always,bl
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/20/2014 6:06:00 PM
Thanks, BL...always good to get a visit from you. I've been on holidays for ten days and unable to post except one poem. I'm getting it all out of my system! :)

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