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Poetic Licence

I’ve renewed my poetic licence Just hope it won’t ever expire Poetry has become a bit of an addiction My words can be fact or they could be fiction But I plan to keep on writing quite a bit Even if you think my poems are a heap of rubbish!* * Can't think of a suitable rhyming word :-) 4th January 2016
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Raven Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Hi Jan, one thing i can assure you of, your work is never rubbish or the word you wanted to use. No swearing, i may soon get the sack. You keep on writing and write from the heart. Your words mean a lot to many people, you write for yourself, you write for them and you write in your own style. Your licence shall never expire as far as i am concerned. Write for your own enjoyment and let know one change you ever. You belong. A seven Jan....MIKE.
Allison Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 2:23 PM
I will never change my style Mike I write for me and hope other people like it:-) hugs jan xx
Turner Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 11:13 AM
I love the sentiment and the humor. Just a suggestion ..."unfit" rhymes with bit. I'm not saying your poem is unfit. I'm simply answering your loud thought at the end.
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 12:07 PM
Thanks Daniel - I was thinking of another word... but swearing isn't allowed on soup lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Laurie Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 5:36 PM
G'day Jan... addiction is the one word that sticks out for me Jan, but I find writing is a wonderful addiction, so make sure that you stay addicted. By doing so, you make this world a better place - thank you Jan - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 5:43 PM
It's one addiction I am happy to admit to:-) hugs Jan xx
Boddie Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 10:55 AM
you need a word to rhyme with bit....that's my specialty, I admit....and sometimes I do get fits....that's when I roll up and sit....listen to hip hop, they way they spit....and when I am high enough, its always another hit....;)
Boddie Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 11:19 AM
I already know that jan....lol
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 11:06 AM
It was my poetic licence Eric lol I can think of a perfect word but it wouldn't be allowed on soup lol:-) hugs jan xx
Sage Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:15 PM
dear Jan, you don't always need rhyming words, a word from you reaches the whole world, they continue to stab with imaginations like sword, you are just good as you are, and that I really adore, especially your humour....a beautiful write you've done here
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Thanks so much White Sage:-) hugs jan xx
Godwin Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 9:14 AM
That is true-ish about rubbish - all that is coming to mind is snubish which isn't a word so now you have me laughing. I love this creative little ditty! CayCay
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 12:15 PM
I was using poetic licence for a word rhyming with bit lol lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Hy Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:49 AM
I hope that you know that your poems are greatly valuable to all of us.. Your pen touches souls and you have a heart of gold. Love, Rahy
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Thanks so much Rahy:-) hugs Jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 2:26 AM
U very well know how valued u r here at soup dear Jan... great pen!
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 7:42 PM
ha! guess you can fool the soup team, jan! adorable!
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 1:50 AM
LOL Ilene I choose my words carefully :-) hugs Jan xx
Shahein Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 5:38 PM
My dear I can assure you that your writings is remarkable, spectacular, magnificent and breathtaking poems believe me , the good writer is the one who can write about anything and who can write from deep within to touch people's souls, I know that I can give u any subject and you will write a mesmerizing poem from it , I really enjoy your writes from the bottom of my heart...hugs / / :) dalia
Allison Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 5:40 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Dalia:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 3:33 PM
You could say: Even if you could not care one whit! Good one, Jan!! I did a poetic license poem myself after my first year or two of writing, just like you!
Allison Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 3:35 PM
I think I'll leave it as it is lol (Hee Hee) hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 3:13 PM
LOL. you are so cute, love this :)
Allison Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 3:16 PM
Thanks Cas I can thank Arthur for the inspiration for this one after he re-wrote my bio for me lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Woods    Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 2:28 PM
lol I think I know the word you were going to use for the final rhyme. haha (may have used that one myself in one of mine). ; ) Well keep that licence current you have plenty of writing to do yet!
Allison Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 2:36 PM
Shhhh Mark don't tell anyone the end word lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Chircop Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 2:11 PM
Definitely not a heap of rubbish sweet lady.I so love your writes both real and fiction, serious and funny ones.
Allison Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 2:15 PM
Thanks Charma was just having a bit of fun:-) I can lay the blame with Arthur.... if anyone has poetic licence he has lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Manassian Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 1:21 PM
YOU GO GIRL!!!! :) We are on the SAME PAGE here! ;) Loved this, Jan. I really did. Hugs, sweetie.
Allison Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 1:25 PM
LOl Eileen I just thought I would have a bit of fun as Arthur used a LOT of poetic licence on my bio on his web page lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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