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I’ve renewed my poetic licence Just hope it won’t ever expire Poetry has become a bit of an addiction My words can be fact or they could be fiction But I plan to keep on writing quite a bit Even if you think my poems are a heap of rubbish!* * Can't think of a suitable rhyming word :-) 4th January 2016

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/9/2016 12:41:00 PM

Hi Jan, one thing i can assure you of, your work is never rubbish or the word you wanted to use. No swearing, i may soon get the sack. You keep on writing and write from the heart. Your words mean a lot to many people, you write for yourself, you write for them and you write in your own style. Your licence shall never expire as far as i am concerned. Write for your own enjoyment and let know one change you ever. You belong. A seven Jan....MIKE.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2016 2:23:00 PM

I will never change my style Mike I write for me and hope other people like it:-) hugs jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/16/2016 11:13:00 AM

I love the sentiment and the humor. Just a suggestion ..."unfit" rhymes with bit. I'm not saying your poem is unfit. I'm simply answering your loud thought at the end.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2016 12:07:00 PM

Thanks Daniel - I was thinking of another word... but swearing isn't allowed on soup lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/8/2016 5:36:00 PM

G'day Jan... addiction is the one word that sticks out for me Jan, but I find writing is a wonderful addiction, so make sure that you stay addicted. By doing so, you make this world a better place - thank you Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 1/8/2016 5:43:00 PM

It's one addiction I am happy to admit to:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/7/2016 10:55:00 AM

you need a word to rhyme with bit....that's my specialty, I admit....and sometimes I do get fits....that's when I roll up and sit....listen to hip hop, they way they spit....and when I am high enough, its always another hit....;)

Eric Boddie
Date: 1/7/2016 11:19:00 AM

I already know that jan....lol

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2016 11:06:00 AM

It was my poetic licence Eric lol I can think of a perfect word but it wouldn't be allowed on soup lol:-) hugs jan xx

White Sage

Date: 1/5/2016 4:15:00 PM

dear Jan, you don't always need rhyming words, a word from you reaches the whole world, they continue to stab with imaginations like sword, you are just good as you are, and that I really adore, especially your humour....a beautiful write you've done here

Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2016 4:20:00 PM

Thanks so much White Sage:-) hugs jan xx

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/5/2016 9:14:00 AM

That is true-ish about rubbish - all that is coming to mind is snubish which isn't a word so now you have me laughing. I love this creative little ditty! CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2016 12:15:00 PM

I was using poetic licence for a word rhyming with bit lol lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Rahy Hy

Date: 1/5/2016 7:49:00 AM

I hope that you know that your poems are greatly valuable to all of us.. Your pen touches souls and you have a heart of gold. Love, Rahy

Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2016 12:14:00 PM

Thanks so much Rahy:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/5/2016 2:26:00 AM

U very well know how valued u r here at soup dear Jan... great pen!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2016 12:14:00 PM

Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/4/2016 7:42:00 PM

ha! guess you can fool the soup team, jan! adorable!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2016 1:50:00 AM

LOL Ilene I choose my words carefully :-) hugs Jan xx

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/4/2016 5:38:00 PM

My dear I can assure you that your writings is remarkable, spectacular, magnificent and breathtaking poems believe me , the good writer is the one who can write about anything and who can write from deep within to touch people's souls, I know that I can give u any subject and you will write a mesmerizing poem from it , I really enjoy your writes from the bottom of my heart...hugs / / :) dalia

Jan Allison
Date: 1/4/2016 5:40:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Dalia:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2016 3:33:00 PM

You could say: Even if you could not care one whit! Good one, Jan!! I did a poetic license poem myself after my first year or two of writing, just like you!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/4/2016 3:35:00 PM

I think I'll leave it as it is lol (Hee Hee) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/4/2016 3:13:00 PM

LOL. you are so cute, love this :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/4/2016 3:16:00 PM

Thanks Cas I can thank Arthur for the inspiration for this one after he re-wrote my bio for me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Woods

Date: 1/4/2016 2:28:00 PM

lol I think I know the word you were going to use for the final rhyme. haha (may have used that one myself in one of mine). ; ) Well keep that licence current you have plenty of writing to do yet!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/4/2016 2:36:00 PM

Shhhh Mark don't tell anyone the end word lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/4/2016 2:11:00 PM

Definitely not a heap of rubbish sweet lady.I so love your writes both real and fiction, serious and funny ones.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/4/2016 2:15:00 PM

Thanks Charma was just having a bit of fun:-) I can lay the blame with Arthur.... if anyone has poetic licence he has lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/4/2016 1:21:00 PM

YOU GO GIRL!!!! :) We are on the SAME PAGE here! ;) Loved this, Jan. I really did. Hugs, sweetie.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/4/2016 1:25:00 PM

LOl Eileen I just thought I would have a bit of fun as Arthur used a LOT of poetic licence on my bio on his web page lol:-) hugs Jan xx