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Poetic Jargon

A one-legged lad from Maverick Spent years rehearsing his rhetoric This aesthetic athletic Proved profoundly poetic His lyrical soup wins plethoric

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Leon Enriquez

Date: 3/22/2014 11:08:00 PM

Dear Huberta: Wow! Leon

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/14/2014 6:54:00 PM

Congratulations Huberta. Joyce

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/14/2014 6:05:00 PM

a sure win for you,huberta.. big congrats!. huggs

Skat A

Date: 3/14/2014 12:45:00 PM

Huberta, Congratulations, enjoying the win. *SKAT

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/14/2014 12:25:00 PM

Such an interesting little limy. Congrats on your placement in the basement. Not meant to be mean. Just rhymed and I can't resist rhyming. My Bad. :) Peace. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/14/2014 5:28:00 AM

Congratulations on the fine win in Limerick contest. Lovely humor, huberta

Huberta Van Akkeren
Date: 3/14/2014 6:03:00 AM

thank you Dr Ram

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2014 2:20:00 AM

Cute one, Huberta! Not sure about those words athletic and plethoric the way you used them here but overall I loved the humor of this one!! congrats.

Huberta Van Akkeren
Date: 3/14/2014 3:00:00 AM

Hi Andrea thank you for the comment...may i explain my reasoning...athletic a play on the agility of an athlete, in this case the mental ability for rhetoric and plethoric as in a wealth of wins...both agreeably off to the side of the original meanings. I appreciate your comment...it was meant to be funny...maybe not so successfully. Cheers H

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/14/2014 12:22:00 AM

With this limerick, you pulled one hell of a trick. Looks like a prime pick. You wrote better than Keith and Mick. That's enough!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/13/2014 1:02:00 AM

Nice and fun to read Huberta, is this for the limerick contest... enjoyed~ Linda

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/12/2014 10:45:00 PM

HA HA HA TO THE LADY DOWN UNDER YOU SURE YOU DON'T WANT TO SWITCH BEARS LOL. LOVE CHERI NICE WORK ALSO GREAT LAD TIS TRUE. CHERI