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Poetic Jargon

A one-legged lad from Maverick
Spent years rehearsing his rhetoric
This aesthetic athletic
Proved profoundly poetic
His lyrical soup wins plethoric

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Leon Enriquez

March 22, 2014 at 11:08 PM

Dear Huberta: Wow! Leon

Joyce Johnson

March 14, 2014 at 6:54 PM

Congratulations Huberta. Joyce

Nette Onclaud

March 14, 2014 at 6:05 PM

a sure win for you,huberta.. big congrats!. huggs

Skat A

March 14, 2014 at 12:45 PM

Huberta, Congratulations, enjoying the win. *SKAT

Robert Johnson

March 14, 2014 at 12:25 PM

Such an interesting little limy. Congrats on your placement in the basement. Not meant to be mean. Just rhymed and I can't resist rhyming. My Bad. :) Peace. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 14, 2014 at 5:28 AM

Congratulations on the fine win in Limerick contest. Lovely humor, huberta

Huberta Van Akkeren

March 14, 2014 at 6:03 AM

thank you Dr Ram

Andrea Dietrich

March 14, 2014 at 2:20 AM

Cute one, Huberta! Not sure about those words athletic and plethoric the way you used them here but overall I loved the humor of this one!! congrats.

Huberta Van Akkeren

March 14, 2014 at 3:00 AM

Hi Andrea thank you for the comment...may i explain my reasoning...athletic a play on the agility of an athlete, in this case the mental ability for rhetoric and plethoric as in a wealth of wins...both agreeably off to the side of the original meanings. I appreciate your comment...it was meant to be funny...maybe not so successfully. Cheers H