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Poetic Jargon

A one-legged lad from Maverick
Spent years rehearsing his rhetoric
This aesthetic athletic
Proved profoundly poetic
His lyrical soup wins plethoric

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/22/2014 11:08:00 PM
Dear Huberta: Wow! Leon
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Date: 3/15/2014 2:39:00 PM
Huberta, this was a skilled work for a limerick.. Totally impressed and you were a true winner!!
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Date: 3/14/2014 6:54:00 PM
Congratulations Huberta. Joyce
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Date: 3/14/2014 6:05:00 PM
a sure win for you,huberta.. big congrats!. huggs
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Date: 3/14/2014 12:45:00 PM
Huberta, Congratulations, enjoying the win. *SKAT
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Date: 3/14/2014 12:25:00 PM
Such an interesting little limy. Congrats on your placement in the basement. Not meant to be mean. Just rhymed and I can't resist rhyming. My Bad. :) Peace. :)
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Date: 3/14/2014 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win in Limerick contest. Lovely humor, huberta
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Huberta van Akkeren
Date: 3/14/2014 6:03:00 AM
thank you Dr Ram
Date: 3/14/2014 2:20:00 AM
Cute one, Huberta! Not sure about those words athletic and plethoric the way you used them here but overall I loved the humor of this one!! congrats.
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Huberta van Akkeren
Date: 3/14/2014 3:00:00 AM
Hi Andrea thank you for the comment...may i explain my reasoning...athletic a play on the agility of an athlete, in this case the mental ability for rhetoric and plethoric as in a wealth of wins...both agreeably off to the side of the original meanings. I appreciate your comment...it was meant to be funny...maybe not so successfully. Cheers H
Date: 3/14/2014 12:22:00 AM
With this limerick, you pulled one hell of a trick. Looks like a prime pick. You wrote better than Keith and Mick. That's enough!
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Date: 3/13/2014 1:02:00 AM
Nice and fun to read Huberta, is this for the limerick contest... enjoyed~ Linda
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Date: 3/12/2014 10:45:00 PM
HA HA HA TO THE LADY DOWN UNDER YOU SURE YOU DON'T WANT TO SWITCH BEARS LOL. LOVE CHERI NICE WORK ALSO GREAT LAD TIS TRUE. CHERI
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Date: 3/12/2014 9:54:00 PM
:). Your poem made me smile.. Out loud!
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Huberta van Akkeren
Date: 3/12/2014 10:25:00 PM
Great...then it was worth the writing. Thank you. Cheers H