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Poetic Inhalation

Inhales prosaic air
muse probes breeze 
Filtering depth 
as image melees 
Drum snares the heart 
beating out dull pain 
Osmosing spores 
form finely tuned rain
Patters tap source
concept ignites
Erupts into thought
exhales and writes

Copyright © David Kavanagh | Year Posted 2024

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Ann Peck Date: 2/13/2024 11:46:00 AM i love your poem, David--every line! Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/12/2024 6:53:00 AM Congratulations on your wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away................ Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 2/13/2024 8:47:00 AM Thank you Paula, was a great contest, cheers David

Robert Sidwell Date: 2/11/2024 12:47:00 PM Well deserved congratulations! Loved the thought, progression and rhythm. Read it multiple times just for fun. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 2/11/2024 2:47:00 PM Thank you so much Robert, glad you enjoyed, I was delighted to place with this one, cheers David

Christuraj Alex Date: 2/9/2024 7:21:00 PM "Drum snares the heart beating out dull pain" - Beautiful concept. Congratulations! Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 2/11/2024 3:28:00 AM Thank you Chris, one of my better lines perhaps, I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

I Am Anaya Date: 2/9/2024 12:20:00 PM Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 2/9/2024 12:42:00 PM Thank you Anaya for returning visit and congrats, cheers David

Tania Kitchin Date: 1/21/2024 4:00:00 AM David, a great poem, well penned. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 1/21/2024 4:06:00 AM Thank you Tania, perhaps a little different for me, but I enjoyed writing this one for the contest, cheers David

I Am Anaya Date: 1/20/2024 3:59:00 PM Inhale, filter, exhale-- everything comes from the heart & from how deep we breathe it. It's how we express it. Your "Inhalation" is right up Dilly's alley! I too delighted in this contest. Oh btw, give my warmest regards to Jan Allison, hats off to her newly garnered celebrity and superb publication of her book and success! F-yeah! Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 1/21/2024 1:40:00 AM Thanks so much Anaya, you’re so right about the heart, it really is a complex organ literarily and physically, I hope Dilly enjoys this one, I will indeed pass on your regards to Jan on her new found success and book, cheers David

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/20/2024 2:42:00 PM Could do with a few gulps of that right now. Can you send me the recipe lol. Tom Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 1/20/2024 3:01:00 PM If that dont fire me up nothing will lol David Kavanagh Date: 1/20/2024 2:51:00 PM Double measure of Gunpowder gin, couple slices of lime, ice cubes and tonic, the experience will happen in due course lol! Cheers David

Lin Lane Date: 1/20/2024 1:28:00 PM You took it all in (including that G&T) swished it all around and like lava from a volcano... you exhaled and it erupted into a rhyming flow of thoughts! Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 1/20/2024 2:14:00 PM You know Lin that’s exactly how it happens, not all the time, but was probably the catalyst on this occasion, thanks so much, cheers David

Silent One Date: 1/20/2024 9:42:00 AM Sounds like you are drunk on poetry David... Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 1/20/2024 9:56:00 AM I did have a G&T whilst drafting this one last night S.O., probably set the tone who knows? just went with it, cheers David