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Poetic Inhalation Poetry Contest

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Ann Peck

Date: 2/13/2024 11:46:00 AM

i love your poem, David--every line! Congratulations on your win!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/12/2024 6:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away................

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/13/2024 8:47:00 AM

Thank you Paula, was a great contest, cheers David

Robert Sidwell

Date: 2/11/2024 12:47:00 PM

Well deserved congratulations! Loved the thought, progression and rhythm. Read it multiple times just for fun.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/11/2024 2:47:00 PM

Thank you so much Robert, glad you enjoyed, I was delighted to place with this one, cheers David

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/9/2024 7:21:00 PM

"Drum snares the heart beating out dull pain" - Beautiful concept. Congratulations!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/11/2024 3:28:00 AM

Thank you Chris, one of my better lines perhaps, I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/9/2024 12:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/9/2024 12:42:00 PM

Thank you Anaya for returning visit and congrats, cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 2/9/2024 11:48:00 AM

This poem was an experience! Loved the rhythm and the fact the reader journeyed along with the exhilaration :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/9/2024 12:41:00 PM

Thanks so much Dilly, was a joy to write this one, I enjoyed the poetic inhalation buzz putting it together, cheers David

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/21/2024 4:00:00 AM

David, a great poem, well penned.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/21/2024 4:06:00 AM

Thank you Tania, perhaps a little different for me, but I enjoyed writing this one for the contest, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 1/20/2024 3:59:00 PM

Inhale, filter, exhale-- everything comes from the heart & from how deep we breathe it. It's how we express it. Your "Inhalation" is right up Dilly's alley! I too delighted in this contest. Oh btw, give my warmest regards to Jan Allison, hats off to her newly garnered celebrity and superb publication of her book and success! F-yeah!

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/21/2024 1:40:00 AM

Thanks so much Anaya, you’re so right about the heart, it really is a complex organ literarily and physically, I hope Dilly enjoys this one, I will indeed pass on your regards to Jan on her new found success and book, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/20/2024 2:42:00 PM

Could do with a few gulps of that right now. Can you send me the recipe lol. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/20/2024 3:01:00 PM

If that dont fire me up nothing will lol

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/20/2024 2:51:00 PM

Double measure of Gunpowder gin, couple slices of lime, ice cubes and tonic, the experience will happen in due course lol! Cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 1/20/2024 1:28:00 PM

You took it all in (including that G&T) swished it all around and like lava from a volcano... you exhaled and it erupted into a rhyming flow of thoughts!

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/20/2024 2:14:00 PM

You know Lin that’s exactly how it happens, not all the time, but was probably the catalyst on this occasion, thanks so much, cheers David

Silent One

Date: 1/20/2024 9:42:00 AM

Sounds like you are drunk on poetry David...

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/20/2024 9:56:00 AM

I did have a G&T whilst drafting this one last night S.O., probably set the tone who knows? just went with it, cheers David