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''Poetic Dances''

From my very beginnings I have been, Like no other- I have lived in a dream; The joy in life sadly I have not seen, Yet my soul is like a cool forest stream. My writing are fragments- I have taken, From a broken heart that weeps a poem; For each sad sorrow, each I awaken, My life is writing- poetry my home. As a grown woman I am a cool dawn, But there is thunder in my soul- a storm; And with my bleeding pen the words are drawn, Each new line will take on its own sweet form. My nights are dreams and my days are trances, And I spin and weave poetic dances. ____________________ August 19, 2016 Poetry/Sonnet/"Poetic Dances" Copyright Protected, ID 16-819-491-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Mid July 2018 Premiere Contest Sponsor, Brian Strand Fourth Place __________________________ Entered in the contest, Sonnet (2016) First Place
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Carber Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Congrats on your win, B.W.-- I too often feel this life is but a dream....
Gentry Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations on your win. I like this. Your use of words showing great emotion is phenomenal to me. Well done!
Barden Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 3:16 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brian's contest, Constance - blessings for many more, my friend! :-) <3
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 6:37 PM
Broken Wings, fantastic! 'Cool dawn... thunder in your soul" Many a woman can relate to this emotional poem . Congrats!
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 6:41 PM
Wow! Your poem won first place! That is great news. Congrats on the win I rated your poem7
Krampe Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:05 AM
Congrats on your win!
James Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 1:26 AM
Great win well done!
Daniel Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 1:24 AM
A worthy win:) Congratulations:)
Van Der Merwe Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 11:22 PM
Congratulations on you placement - Wow a beautiful write.. Keep on writing please. Mark
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Such a lovely Sonnet, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your 1st Place win in the 'Sonnet' contest. Hugs, Sandra
Bradfield Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 2:21 PM
A really special write! Congratulations and well earned!..Larry
Chansarkar Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Poetic dance like no other!Love the uniqueness of your poems Broken!
Roper Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 11:12 AM
Constance, congratulations on your win on this beautiful piece... Hugs Eve
Hamilton Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Loved it! what a dreamy feel and flow, especially like the spinning and weaving part, dance away fine poetess.
Raven Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 7:47 AM
Hi Constance, you certainly do write poetic dances. An excellent write from your gentle pen. One of my favourite forms for reading is the sonnet and i am glad i looked in on this sonnet today. You write poetic songs of such beauty that they always touch the heart so softly. You always place beauty on the page Constance. Your words touch so deeply each and every person that reads them. I join in the dance everytime i do read from you. A seven and a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX.
Scott Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 1:09 AM
So beautiful!!! Poetic soulful beauty. I love this write. God bless your poetic soul.
Beaufort Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 2:53 PM
You are incredible. Your words are such a gift. Things have made you what you are or at least left their impression upon your gentle brain. But the words you sew and the way you phrase each thought is just completely immersing. Your poems are fashioned with such love and tenderness. Thank-you for these wonderful moments.
James Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 1:33 PM
Wonderful write..more more!!
Inman Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 6:45 AM
Gorgeous poem BW. This is what draws me to your poetry, your beautiful expression of your deep emotions.
Daniel Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 6:22 AM
A lovely poem, Constance:) Fave and #7:)
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