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Poetic Bliss

Lost in a vast forest of old paths, winding A damp cold place of gnarled trees, twisting Whispers of solemn grandness And hues of greenness This writer's Bliss This dreamer's Forlorn deep darkness Where drooping branches caress And dark poetic thoughts are rambling Lost in a vast forest of old paths, winding __________________________ February 12, 2015 Poetry/Rhyme/Poetic Bliss Copyright Protected, ID 02-640-399-12 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France My invented form is called Poetic Ramblings For the Standard contest An Invented Form, sponsor Andrea Dietrich, Judged 03/2015 Fourth place

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Skat A

Date: 2/27/2015 11:00:00 PM

Broken, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/24/2015 12:40:00 AM

Fantastic write Broken wings,, loved the name u gave here,, Congrats on big win!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/23/2015 1:27:00 PM

I really enjoyed the darker atmosphere and imagery of this wonderful poem. I often find myself lost on that same winding path when I am writing...

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/23/2015 10:01:00 AM

Who could not get lost in this woven vine of loveliness.....?? I feel the shade, the serenity and mossy dampness of a thoughtful time at peace. Love the place you have taken me, if only for a moment! Congratulations, to you! Nice one!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/23/2015 8:03:00 AM

Lovely, congratulations.

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/23/2015 7:39:00 AM

Nicely done, grats on your win!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/23/2015 2:00:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2015 12:22:00 AM

Constance, this is very beautiful. As I said at my blog, my only issue with it is that i rhyme differently than you do with suffixes like 'ing. However, I see some other poets rhyme this way, on the unstressed syllable and i cannot discount how brilliant your theme is. So it gets high marks from me. Congrats on your win.

Skat A

Date: 2/14/2015 1:06:00 AM

Your poem's so amazing... SKAT

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/13/2015 11:35:00 PM

Pure joy to read it flows so well creates such a wonderful Faye picture. The complexity of the form you have met and transcended. It is a brilliant write. Love Shane xxx PS happy Valentine's day my friend

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/13/2015 7:46:00 PM

I think Andrea will be pleased.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/13/2015 7:33:00 PM

I love this, Constance! Such a touching, expressive write, and you made this form look easy...best wishes in the contest. I think you'll be at the top...hugs, Rhonda

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/13/2015 8:29:00 AM

a 7 for this pen... such a nice take on the topic... best wishes, nad

Darkland Poetry

Date: 2/12/2015 9:33:00 PM

This form wasn't easy and you handled it nicely. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/12/2015 4:55:00 PM

so beautifully penned - I think Andrea will love the sentiment here - good luck in the contest - have finally finished my poem - oh what a challenge! Hugs jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 2/12/2015 4:42:00 PM

"And dark poetic thoughts are rumbling" a 7 from me