Constance La France Poet Rhyme

Poetic Bliss

Lost in a vast forest of old paths, winding
A damp cold place of gnarled trees, twisting
Whispers of solemn grandness
And hues of greenness
This writer's
Bliss
This dreamer's
Forlorn deep darkness
Where drooping branches caress
And dark poetic thoughts are rambling
Lost in a vast forest of old paths, winding


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February 12, 2015

Poetry/Rhyme/Poetic Bliss
Copyright Protected, ID 02-640-399-12
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

My invented form is called Poetic Ramblings


For the Standard contest An Invented Form, 
sponsor Andrea Dietrich, Judged 03/2015

Fourth place

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Skat A February 27, 2015 at 11:00 PM Broken, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 24, 2015 at 12:40 AM Fantastic write Broken wings,, loved the name u gave here,, Congrats on big win!

Kelly Deschler February 23, 2015 at 1:27 PM I really enjoyed the darker atmosphere and imagery of this wonderful poem. I often find myself lost on that same winding path when I am writing...

Carrie Richards February 23, 2015 at 10:01 AM Who could not get lost in this woven vine of loveliness.....?? I feel the shade, the serenity and mossy dampness of a thoughtful time at peace. Love the place you have taken me, if only for a moment! Congratulations, to you! Nice one!!

Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 8:03 AM Lovely, congratulations.

Casarah Nance February 23, 2015 at 7:39 AM Nicely done, grats on your win!

Jan Allison February 23, 2015 at 2:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2015 at 12:22 AM Constance, this is very beautiful. As I said at my blog, my only issue with it is that i rhyme differently than you do with suffixes like 'ing. However, I see some other poets rhyme this way, on the unstressed syllable and i cannot discount how brilliant your theme is. So it gets high marks from me. Congrats on your win.

Skat A February 14, 2015 at 1:06 AM Your poem's so amazing... SKAT

Shane Cooper February 13, 2015 at 11:35 PM Pure joy to read it flows so well creates such a wonderful Faye picture. The complexity of the form you have met and transcended. It is a brilliant write. Love Shane xxx PS happy Valentine's day my friend

Richard Lamoureux February 13, 2015 at 7:46 PM I think Andrea will be pleased.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 13, 2015 at 7:33 PM I love this, Constance! Such a touching, expressive write, and you made this form look easy...best wishes in the contest. I think you'll be at the top...hugs, Rhonda

Poesy Relish February 13, 2015 at 8:29 AM a 7 for this pen... such a nice take on the topic... best wishes, nad

Darkland Poetry February 12, 2015 at 9:33 PM This form wasn't easy and you handled it nicely. :)

Jan Allison February 12, 2015 at 4:55 PM so beautifully penned - I think Andrea will love the sentiment here - good luck in the contest - have finally finished my poem - oh what a challenge! Hugs jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri February 12, 2015 at 4:42 PM "And dark poetic thoughts are rumbling" a 7 from me