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Poetic Bliss

Lost in a vast forest of old paths, winding
A damp cold place of gnarled trees, twisting
Whispers of solemn grandness
And hues of greenness
This writer's
Bliss
This dreamer's
Forlorn deep darkness
Where drooping branches caress
And dark poetic thoughts are rambling
Lost in a vast forest of old paths, winding


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February 12, 2015

Poetry/Rhyme/Poetic Bliss
Copyright Protected, ID 02-640-399-12
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

My invented form is called Poetic Ramblings


For the Standard contest An Invented Form, 
sponsor Andrea Dietrich, Judged 03/2015

Fourth place

Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2015

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Skat A Date: 2/27/2015 11:00:00 PM Broken, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 2/24/2015 12:40:00 AM Fantastic write Broken wings,, loved the name u gave here,, Congrats on big win! Login to Reply

Kelly Deschler Date: 2/23/2015 1:27:00 PM I really enjoyed the darker atmosphere and imagery of this wonderful poem. I often find myself lost on that same winding path when I am writing... Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 2/23/2015 10:01:00 AM Who could not get lost in this woven vine of loveliness.....?? I feel the shade, the serenity and mossy dampness of a thoughtful time at peace. Love the place you have taken me, if only for a moment! Congratulations, to you! Nice one!! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/23/2015 8:03:00 AM Lovely, congratulations. Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 2/23/2015 7:39:00 AM Nicely done, grats on your win! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 2/23/2015 2:00:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/23/2015 12:22:00 AM Constance, this is very beautiful. As I said at my blog, my only issue with it is that i rhyme differently than you do with suffixes like 'ing. However, I see some other poets rhyme this way, on the unstressed syllable and i cannot discount how brilliant your theme is. So it gets high marks from me. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 2/14/2015 1:06:00 AM Your poem's so amazing... SKAT Login to Reply

Shane Cooper Date: 2/13/2015 11:35:00 PM Pure joy to read it flows so well creates such a wonderful Faye picture. The complexity of the form you have met and transcended. It is a brilliant write. Love Shane xxx PS happy Valentine's day my friend Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/13/2015 7:46:00 PM I think Andrea will be pleased. Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 2/13/2015 7:33:00 PM I love this, Constance! Such a touching, expressive write, and you made this form look easy...best wishes in the contest. I think you'll be at the top...hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Poesy Relish Date: 2/13/2015 8:29:00 AM a 7 for this pen... such a nice take on the topic... best wishes, nad Login to Reply

Darkland Poetry Date: 2/12/2015 9:33:00 PM This form wasn't easy and you handled it nicely. :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 2/12/2015 4:55:00 PM so beautifully penned - I think Andrea will love the sentiment here - good luck in the contest - have finally finished my poem - oh what a challenge! Hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Njeri Hunjeri Date: 2/12/2015 4:42:00 PM "And dark poetic thoughts are rumbling" a 7 from me Login to Reply