Poet Vs the Poem Or Enjoy the Rush

Poetry often seems to choose
its poet, how words fly
out of the writer's hand, almost
thoughtlessly – like bats from a cave 
at sunset, attacking paper, as would a swarm
of carnivorous appetite.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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March 13, 2023 at 9:10 PM
Are we really all THAT bad Joe ? Unfortunately a lot of what makes sense to others makes no sense to me. If I have to read it twice then disect it line for line and still cant work out the meaning.. I give up. This not the case. I enjoyed this one. Cheers
DiMino Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 7:19 AM
Thank you, Wen; I am probably good and bad...my best, somewhere I am have yet to find:) May take some more poems. Love your Bullmastiff! Tempting to get one, but my cats give me more of the space I need. Dogs are really more like hands-on needy family, and cats more like bosses, which I have grown accustomed to ignoring over the years -- certain that both Pavlov and his dog were conditioned by Pavlov's cat. Blessings my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Ooh…excellent and thought provoking imagery!
DiMino Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 1:14 PM
Thank you, Kim; this was so much fun to write. Blessings!
Andresen Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 8:51 AM
- Many "spewing" out poems that do not make sense ... I am no expert ... and have a lot to learn ... great written, Joe - hugs
DiMino Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 12:07 PM
As long as whatever you write, makes sense to you...that is enough. In my opinion. If others enjoy what you have said, seem to find greater value in the write, then maybe your voice was also God's opinion. Blessings my friend.
Turner Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 7:49 AM
I believe what you are saying is that everyone is a poet but not everyone can write poetry and I agree to certain point. verbalizing the poetry one sees and feels is like anything else. The more one does it, the easier it gets. Cool write, Joe.
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March 12, 2023 at 7:58 AM
I believe poetry is like sun bathing: one prepares himself, puts on the lotion and positions the chair -- and then the sun does its work. Train, learn...and it will happen. As with each of us, having an individual spirit, so poetry has a group spirit, producing its beauty and guarding its significance. My opinion, that is all.
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