Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Dodoitsu

Poet Bee

Butterflies flit to flowers
serenity in the shade
reclined adirondack chair
a buzzzz interrupts...

Ouch, bee sting "bites me", in pain, 
I run for the cortisone.
Impossible! metered buzzzz
...off to find Cyndi!

By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
for Linda-Marie's Bite Me contest
April 9, 2012

*Tag, Cyndi's it! I wasn't going to enter this contest, but decided I couldn't
miss out on all the fun.

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Janette Fisher April 17, 2012 at 2:10 PM Many congrats on your feature this week - rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown April 17, 2012 at 5:54 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rhonda. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown April 16, 2012 at 12:17 PM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson April 14, 2012 at 9:34 PM Fun entry. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich April 14, 2012 at 9:08 PM and hey, our bugs were similar!!

Andrea Dietrich April 14, 2012 at 9:08 PM love how you ran for cortisone!! Congrats on the win.

Deborah Burch April 14, 2012 at 8:36 PM :) Congratulations on your win Rhonda! well done...lol big hugs,love debs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 14, 2012 at 7:56 PM congrats Rhonda on sweet success for a super entry luv.. thankxxx..

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet April 14, 2012 at 3:42 AM ooh no i hope it didn't hurt that bad..,great write.

Poet Destroyer A April 9, 2012 at 10:22 PM Rhonda, i love the graceful image..lol..until someone gets bitten...ouch.. that must of hurt... good luck in the contest... Cyndi, watch out... and thanks for the comment... God Bless,..pd

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 9, 2012 at 5:05 PM Debbie is running for her life! She does not want the "bite". On Cyndi, this bee has set its sight! I hope Cyndi will "take the bite".

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 9, 2012 at 12:40 PM great one Rhonda.. good luck luv.. did u "bite" Debbie Guzzi? or another Debbie???

Wilma Neels April 9, 2012 at 12:00 PM hey there Rhonda, so glad to see you entered the contest.. I hope the cortisone helped a little ;) I enjoyed your entry! blessings Wilma

Debbie Guzzi April 9, 2012 at 11:59 AM You are too silly in my part of the work this phrase has a very naughty meaning now what do I do?? L & L Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 9, 2012 at 12:23 PM The only naughty thought that crossed my mind was a serenading bee sting. I promise! LOL...how funny. I never would have thought such a thing. Sorry, Debbie.