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Poe’s Hourglass: A Melancholic Decree

Poe’s Hourglass: A Melancholic Decree Once upon a midnight dreary, As sands slip through life’s hourglass, eerie, I pondered upon my penitent past, And the regrets that will forever last. Time, that wicked thief, has stolen away, Leaving behind fragments of my yesterday. Each grain, a specter, fell with a sigh, A haunting reminder of moments gone by. Regrets, like phantoms, torment my soul, Their presence an anguish I cannot control. Paths untrodden, chances missed, Eternally trapped in a remorseful abyss. The hourglass, a harbinger of mortality, Hath measured my existence with cruel finality. As grains descend, my heart doth weep, Lost in the void of time, where plutonian specters meet. In vain, I grasped at the sands so fleet, But they slipped through my fingers with deceit. A pallid burden I could not divest, Heavy upon my chest, a weight doth rest. O’ time! That cruel, relentless foe, With each passing moment, thy presence dost grow. No respite, no solace, can I find, Like a thief in the night, gone is my time. And now, in the dark recesses of my desolate mind, I find sorrow in the verses I bind. For in these words, I resurrect demons of the past, And find memories mournful, that will forever last. In the style of Poe, I lament the unyielding sands of time, A symbol of life’s ever fleeting, haunting rhyme. Regrets! Regrets, forever thy shall be, In the hourglass of life, a melancholic decree. And as the sands doth slip, and the ravens soar, I hear the whispers of, “Nevermore”. -Edward

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Date: 4/6/2024 3:07:00 PM
Thanx! Mama Mary can be more than a fair-weather friend, she offers "Let it be" round every bend! (I wrote that. Now here's my fave lines adapted from Litany of Our Lady of Sorrows: "Mother bereaved of thy Son, pray 4 us. Fount of tears, pray 4 us. Remedy in perplexity, pray 4 us. Joy of the afflicted, pray 4 us. Solace of the desolate, pray 4 us. Compassion to the incredulous, pray 4 us. Embrace of the wounded, pray 4 us. Strength of the weak, pray 4 us. Companion of the dreary, pray 4 us...")
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Date: 4/6/2024 2:12:00 PM
I wrote that other first rhyme below in response to your hauntingly beautiful poe-m, but this next one is by Sr. Faustina (so you know you're not alone feeling that way): "...Times past are no longer within my powers/ no past thing can I change, improve or augment/ neither sage nor prophet can reverse bygone hours/ whatever the past contains to God must be sent..." :) I'm sharing this not to reduce your words, but acknowledging your anguish, extend you hope & consolation: God loves you so much, and He can work everything out for good, if you let Him. :)
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Date: 4/6/2024 2:02:00 PM
As long as you still live, there is a longer chance-- for your soul to enjoy Divine Mercy's expanse... this Sunday will be the Feast of Mercy, a time to accept God's solace, you see...
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Edward Wraith
Date: 4/6/2024 2:46:00 PM
Your kindness does not escape notice. Your compassion and care bring warmth to a weathered and tethered soul.
Date: 4/4/2024 6:19:00 AM
This is quite good Edward. None can change the past, nor hold onto a moment, for like grains of sand in the hourglass time is unyielding, unforgiving, relentless. If you like Poe you might enjoy my poem, Poe's Untimely Demise. I consider it to be my best to date. I also have a funny poem titled The Poe with audio attached
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Edward Wraith
Date: 4/4/2024 8:06:00 AM
I am grateful for your feedback, Tom. Thank you for taking the time. While our views on Poe may diverge, I must acknowledge my enjoyment of your pieces referenced. Your writing exudes entertainment and captivation, showcasing your remarkable talent. Despite the variance in our writing styles, subjects, and perspectives on beauty and inspiration, I hold admiration for exceptional craftsmanship. You are a true talent.
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/4/2024 6:57:00 AM
Ps. I sent you a soupmail
Date: 4/4/2024 5:27:00 AM
To my esteemed Poe enthusiast, whose ardor for the macabre knows no bounds, this dedication is yours. May your reading be filled with sinister delight and eerie enchantment.
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