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Slave to wayward thoughts, unwritten poems return to haunt. Tempest of tragedy arrives as a harbinger, wrecking fences that divide sleeping paths. There is no one to show the way. Father's sins betray, mother's tongue destroys. Punishing a misled mind, to ponder unwanted silence. Time is no friend, so much is lost in translation. Perturbed by forgotten promises, heart becomes a victim to the void, broken dreams have left behind. Although a victor of emotional battles, scars sting, like salt rubbed into wounds. Soul unable to bare suppressed burdens, admits defeat to mental adversities. Life is like a portrait, moving in slow motion. Its black and white hues, highlight uncertainties of future passages, reminding of regrets from past passengers - pausing present foretold destinies. Life is a crossroad of two mismatched meadows, one full of blossoms blooming through gain, one full of brambles hiding childhood treasures. Yet all flowers eventually die, brambles sting, but can be cleared. Life is an ephemeral eclipse - a balance between light and darkness. Questions will always overbalance answers. Change is unpredictable like the September sun. A dilemma of chance and choice, expressed through analogies and metaphors poems come to life,  when tired tongues are silent.
The Silent One 15 September 2019 Example for the Crossroads contest

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Date: 11/23/2019 11:47:00 AM
Every purpose in life changes and has reasons for those changes. We all have crossroads where we have to choose which way we go. Wow brilliant write. love phyl
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Date: 11/6/2019 2:40:00 AM
This is why we must write our poems down when they come to us. "unwritten poems return to haunt." Great job!
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:20:00 PM
Silent One, So much to ponder in this poem. I enjoyed going down this road you've described so well. You're right that questions will always outweigh answers. Thanks for taking a trip such as this, down the crossroads of your life. -Richard
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Date: 9/25/2019 12:42:00 PM
An emotive write SO- Life is ' a balance between light and darkness ........ flowers eventually die brambles sting but can be cleared' - I like your continual reference throughout the poem to basically the choices one has and how one's life is influenced by circumstances of one's youth and environment, - we all reach crossroads, - 'a dilemma of chance and choice' we are all accountable, life is a constant challenge! Excellent write, Hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 9/21/2019 1:45:00 PM
My friend, the purity,beauty and immense depths in your poetry always awe me. This one inspired me to compose this morn and even to compose in non-rhyming verses! I feel this must have come from a life that has suffered and lived as have so many of us- in this dark world while seeking a far far better place to one day be. A true gem and a very fine fav..
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Date: 9/20/2019 8:43:00 PM
I really love how you have shed a part of your heart in this beautiful poem Silent. Poetry can be so cathartic and healing. This is a great example for your contest. I hope I can come up with something half as great as this! xxoo
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Date: 9/20/2019 12:42:00 PM
And indeed, analogies and metaphors give expressive life to this excellent poem, S-1. Well done! Regards // paul
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Date: 9/20/2019 12:01:00 AM
I'm speechless that was amazing
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Date: 9/18/2019 4:51:00 PM
I can feel so many emotions in this poem..I can feel the pain ...the scars of life..I can feel regrets for choices not chosen,chances not taken."Change is unpredictable like the september sun"..Unexpected changes happen in life too..but every change carries reason and a purpose...What a powerful poem Silent One..
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Date: 9/18/2019 9:51:00 AM
Silence is often underrated. I like the direction you went with this one. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/17/2019 6:09:00 PM
S1 I often envy where your mind goes to collect words so beautifully arranged. How have you been?
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Date: 9/17/2019 4:39:00 PM
This is an awesome poem, Silent One. Your descriptions of the things that go wrong in relationships -- "Forgotten promises" and "emotional battles" are on target. That's probably why others like me do not pursue relationships anymore. I especially admire the "eclipse" metaphor. Haven't seen your contest yet, but this is one of your best! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 9/16/2019 4:25:00 PM
Hi Silent, another winner from your pen, a wonderful write. A creative write, with such deep thoughts. This is an excellent example for your contest my friend. The journey through your words is always special. So many are the crossroads we reach in life, how we approach them is all important. A fav. Have a wonderful Tuesday. your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 9/16/2019 2:05:00 PM
Your Poetic talent is non parallel. Deep dense emotions explained in poem. Yet I contradict. Life has no balance on brightness and darkness.it's a hazard haphazard journey. Blessing always.
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Date: 9/16/2019 9:39:00 AM
This is deep. Great ideas here.
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Date: 9/15/2019 7:51:00 PM
Emotions emanate throughout...slave to wayward thoughts... time is no friend, so much lost in translation...the final lines! Well done, my friend!
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Date: 9/15/2019 7:45:00 PM
Poems reflect what's in the heart. (Most of the Time) With you: Your words always hold, silence, darkness and pain. An ache within. Shadows lingering and moments so far away. Perhaps this is your muse and not your truth. I see it is an example for a contest, yet- emotions can still be real. This is deep and powerful my friend. ~ Brandy
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Date: 9/15/2019 7:14:00 PM
I really like the metaphors of the tired tongues and the crossroads, Silent ONe. I am guessing this was inspiration for your current contest! You created a great theme for us.
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Date: 9/15/2019 5:22:00 PM
one can feel the depths of this one, the heartache, and loneliness through your pen....wow, a prime example for your contest... this is excellent, it will be hard to even pen anything near this quality... hugs
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Date: 9/15/2019 4:35:00 PM
WoW! Silent, This is a great example for you contest. Enjoy the rest of your day my friend;-) Alexis
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Date: 9/15/2019 11:54:00 AM
Speechless once again my friend! My tongue is silent! :-)
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Silent One
Date: 9/15/2019 3:13:00 PM
Thank you Bobby...now to bring those poems to life
Date: 9/15/2019 10:01:00 AM
I sit in silence listening to your words and images from my past come rushing towards me -- sweet and sour!
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Silent One
Date: 9/15/2019 3:13:00 PM
Thank you David..
Date: 9/15/2019 9:27:00 AM
Well said my friend. Life is a mixture of tragedy and triumph. We all bear the battle scars. Some bring us pride and some we wish to forget but can't. I always tell my children and grandchildren that Life Is Not Always Fair And It's Not Always Fun But It's Always An Experience. It just depends on what we choose to learn from that experience and how we allow it to affect our lives. God Bless, JB
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Silent One
Date: 9/15/2019 3:14:00 PM
Well said Judy.. Thank you..
Date: 9/15/2019 8:06:00 AM
Such an expressive poem. I fully enjoyed reading this and it is definitely a inspiration. I hope I can join in the fun if I can come up with something that inspires me as you have done. Blessings
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Silent One
Date: 9/15/2019 8:15:00 AM
Thank you Regina, I am sure you will write a fitting poem for the theme..
Date: 9/15/2019 7:54:00 AM
Life and it's mysteries...the visible and invisible ever present whether day or night...Nicely expressed here...
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Silent One
Date: 9/15/2019 8:14:00 AM
Thank you Arturo..
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