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Placed 1st in Andrea Dietrich's Quincrosticain Contest, October 8, 2023              

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Pen a lovely villanelle about the joys of spring
Or couplets on romance that make me sigh and swoon.
Excite me with descriptions of a brisk day’s autumn fling.
Mesmerize me with lyrics about the sun, stars, and moon.
Share your gems with others. Let kindred spirits commune.
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Ligon Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 8:30 PM
Very fitting for the contest, something poets can relate to. Congrats!
Ashley Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 7:07 PM
Dear Janice, your poem about poems is beautiful and inspiring! Wonderful message and imagery. Congratulations for your top spot in Andrea contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Canerdy Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:25 AM
Susan, thanks a million! Janice
Fowler Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 7:07 AM
Aww. This is so sweet and soft Janice. Sharing and communing with kindred spirits - does it get any better? Congratulations! :)
Canerdy Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 11:02 AM
Thanks a million, Linda. Janice
Alex Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 1:57 AM
"Share your gems with others" - A very inspirational Quincrosticain. Congratulations!
Canerdy Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Thanks so much, Christuraj. Janice
May Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 7:52 PM
Beautiful write Janice, Congrats on your win
Canerdy Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 5:44 AM
Thanks so much, Joseph. Janice
George Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 7:47 PM
Congratulations Janice on your well deserved acrostic ! Well done....
Canerdy Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 5:44 AM
Thanks so much, Valsa. Janice
Daniel Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 6:31 PM
Superb writing, Janice, "Let kindred spirits commune" - awesome... Congratulations:)
Canerdy Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 7:28 PM
Joanna, thanks a million! Janice!
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 11:07 AM
Congrats for top spot in my contest. This was perfection and got five points in each of my four criteria: correct English usage/ message and/or imagery/ following all contest rules and my personal opinion.
Canerdy Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Andrea, you have made my day! I'm over the moon. Thanks a million! Janice
Y. Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 8:58 PM
Hi Janice, You penned such a well-written acrostic on poems. Reading them can evoke such you described so well. I’m so happy I found this site and met kindred spirits who enjoy writing like I do! Thanks for sharing this gem. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
Canerdy Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 9:08 PM
Alexis, thanks a million for your response to my poem! Janice
Kauffman Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 11:25 AM
Indeed, "let kindred spirits commune!" How blessed are we to have poetry friends with whom we can share our "gems" and our struggles. Thank you for sharing this little treasure! Blessings of autumn joy!
Canerdy Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 8:52 PM
Sam, your response to my poem has made me smile BIG. Thanks so much. Janice
George Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 3:34 AM
Excellent acrostic ! Poems on any subject if written with real inspiration and talent can thrill many hearts. Thanks for sharing a little gem of a poem dear Caren!
Canerdy Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 8:51 PM
Valsa, what a wonderful response to my poem! Thank you so much. Janice
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 5:51 AM
What a beautiful message you convey, Janice. Poems enrich our lives--as you so wonderfully illustrate.
Canerdy Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 10:46 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Jones Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 4:53 PM
Melodic and an easy read! Love
Canerdy Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 5:35 PM
Thanks a million, Karen. Janice
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