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I would like to start by thanking everyone for their overwhelming support with my book and a special appreciation to those who purchased it.  It has left me speechless. 

It is available on Amazong and I believe it can be purchased as an ebook

https://www.amazon.co.uk/Misunderstood-Metaphor-Silent-One/dp/B09QP6HJGJ/ref=sr_1_1?crid=3TP7YGUM08OF3&keywords=misunderstood+metaphor&qid=1648372249&sprefix=misunderstood+me%2Caps%2C72&sr=8-1

 

Today it is Mother's day in the UK.  My mum is my hero and the most special person in my life.  When everyone else has abandoned me, my mum is always there.  I had a difficult childhood, especially without a father, but my mum was always there.

I remember around 8 years ago when I was having treatment for an evil illness, i went to stay with my mum, because I know she would know how to best look after me.... and she did, and I recovered due to her love....

Wishing all mums a lovely day today all over the world.

In times of darkness, When time is like raging seas, my mum Is the lighthouse, illuminating the skies, guiding me to the shore. There is an art to motherhood. A paradise on earth, with blessings of a priceless prayer. Anyone can give birth, but not everyone can be a mother, I have written so many March musings, simmering scribbles with alliterative metaphors, but my mamma is the poem of my soul. When the Devil would trick with his wicked games, her angelic voice would bring clarity. Reminding me that twisted thoughts will only lead to a maze of uncertainty. Each time death knocked at my door, Her empathic energy would ease my pain. Always told me if I didn't appreciate inner beauty; the red of a rose would kill my soul. How I'll be forever collecting thorns, so I planted an abundance of flowers, in kaleidoscopic colours, ensuring Spring smells were soothing. I remember when burdens became too heavy, swift changes of life brought only sorrow, grey clouds followed my every move with black skies full of soulless stars. There was a spring with deadly roses, and countless colourless flowers. I wondered if my heart would bloom this spring. you were the perfect remedy, like the mercy of rain upon petals, who gave warmth after a cold night. Words lost in a hustle and bustle of silence, bloomed like lilacs and daffodils, kissed by the sweetness of morning dew, as colourful clouds in clementine hues, greeted the sun in sapphire skies. I always have regurgitating regrets, when being strong, I never express enough, how no woman alive could ever take your place. In a world where love can be a hallucination, people lose their affection, let them change, but you always stay the same.

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Date: 5/26/2023 2:05:00 PM
Well you sure say a lot for a 'Silent One' thinks one.? A good Appreciative write on your mother Has out-come however is my final sum' Hope you are well..I'm the same Joe That met you on f b.. Just had my Account there in 2022? locked.' Out All the best.'
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Date: 12/5/2022 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on the new book. So happy to hear it is out and doing well. A wonderful tribute to your mom she sounds like a wonderful caring lady. love phyl
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Date: 8/20/2022 1:20:00 PM
Alas...not all woman become mothers or good mothers....You are fortunate to have an angel by your side. You gave a great tribute to her here, along with all devoted mothers. Great write. Touches the heart. :) Sunita UPD
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Date: 8/16/2022 9:59:00 PM
Hey... a little worried about you. Everything okay?
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Date: 7/16/2022 1:15:00 AM
this is indeed a priceless gem lovely piece thanks for sharing.
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Date: 7/13/2022 3:35:00 AM
Heyy. I love it! Mama knows best!! Keep writing and inspired. Love, Amor
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Date: 6/30/2022 5:22:00 PM
I did not know you completed a book S1. I hope all is well with you. I am very happy for you. ~Flo
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Date: 6/20/2022 9:47:00 AM
Loved it
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Date: 6/13/2022 5:04:00 AM
You are truly blessed to have this earthbound angel (Your Mother) to guide you and be with you on this journey of life. You have a wonderful gift for writing my poetic friend. Sincerely, Elaine
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Date: 6/9/2022 2:59:00 PM
This is such a moving and beautiful tribute to your mother. Congratulations on your book. Bless you in all your future endeavors. Love and blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/8/2022 5:01:00 PM
sorry you don't have lots of time to be here. Miss ya!
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Date: 5/27/2022 9:09:00 AM
Sounds like you got yourself an incredible mother. Where did you go? You popped in briefly at one point. Already we are almost in June and you have disappeared again!
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Date: 5/4/2022 8:11:00 PM
i could not have said it better and i will be ever so grateful i was with my mother daily caring for her 2 years before she passed....i pray you have the same privilege....
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Date: 5/3/2022 4:26:00 PM
this brought a tear to my eye. Amazing poem. A caring mother is one of life's greatest gifts. x
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Date: 4/26/2022 9:04:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to your mother for Mother’s Day Silent One… Belle
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Date: 4/24/2022 11:51:00 PM
I have been hibernating of sorts, but here I am peeping out for a visit to you, and I find this! Goodness, it is so beautiful, it is like a bright ray of light that shines straight up to heaven from earth. <3 I am excited about your book,I will go over and take a look at it as soon as I'm done here <3 Hugs to you my friend ~BJ
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 4/25/2022 12:04:00 AM
My Mother's Day gift is ordered SO, I can't wait to read your book, I am truly excited :)
Date: 4/13/2022 11:40:00 AM
WOW!!! What a great/wonderful and true write. Love your line, "Anyone can give birth, but not everyone can be a mother," So very true. A lovely tribute to your mother. She must be very proud of you. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................
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Date: 4/6/2022 10:10:00 AM
The love and tenderness in your precious tribute poem to your dear mom is priceless, Silent! There is no sweeter or more powerful love than the love of a devoted mother! You are blessed to have her, and she is blessed to have such a sweet, sensitive son like you! Your inner spirit shines with much depth, dear Silent One! :)
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Date: 4/3/2022 1:10:00 PM
There is no love like mother's love. I remember George Floyd's last word were a call to his mother. God bless you, dear Harry. What a wonderful tribute to your mother.
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Date: 4/2/2022 7:59:00 PM
Love this, and the sentiment from the heart, the poetry superb, the story intriguing. all in all very special, as are all your poems, SO, Stay Safe..Harry
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Date: 3/30/2022 12:07:00 PM
Beautifully done. I, too, adore my mother. She has been a rock on my life and a never ending light... God bless you and your mom. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/30/2022 10:16:00 AM
Indeed my friend... I miss mine so much. Even though she is gone for a few years, I talk to her on regular bases. My mother was the poem to my soul as well... It is beautiful poetry...
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Date: 3/29/2022 11:13:00 AM
Your awesome and beautiful relationship and love you have for your mother is the garden of sweet smelling, brightly colored flowers you planted - her presence are the flowers, and the flowers your much loved mother. A wonderful poem that forever like the stars in the sky, will light up your life. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/29/2022 11:15:00 AM
Kudos for you book SO, I shall look it up.
Date: 3/29/2022 5:47:00 AM
Silent, this is a lovely tribute to your mum! The next to last verse is so beautiful with its bursting colors and sentiment! I think that this mother’s day for me will be harder than the last. My mom left just before and I was in a deep fog. Now I have clarity. Still God blessed me with my mom for a long time. God bless you and your dear mum, on this special day. <3
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Date: 3/29/2022 4:58:00 AM
Such a fantastic expression of your feelings, this is, Silent One! Your style glimmers through each line and your mum is definitely one to be cherished!. I loved reading this today! Congratulations on your book as well! Happy Tuesday !!
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