White Wolf Poet Sonnet

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Poem From the Heart:

Please don't force me to write another word,
I speak from thy heart as if it was heard,
My pen useless in expressions I find,
Though it stems from every part of my mind.

How can one shift the unmovable force?
While helpless and stranded in this of course,
Speaking from my pen from one point of view,
Is all that I have to give you a clue.

And hoping that my words will shine on through,
Giving you a glimpse of what I hold true,
In such few words, I will not find a way,
But I shall try my best to have my say.

A sonnet I have written words to you,
Poems from my heart, the best I can do.

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Doug Vinson February 27, 2017 at 1:23 PM "I speak from thy heart as if it was heard" - I love this line. Okay, Rick, no forcing you to write another word - you'd be over your syllable limit then ha ha ha. Sincerely, Qagdop the Mercotan. (My real name, as I am an alien.) White Wolf February 28, 2017 at 5:33 PM So, your true identity is finally revealed! Well, I'm actually Izillixinizi from Altair! Aren't these humans a peculiar lot? /|\

Chuck Melugin February 22, 2017 at 3:16 PM Wolf, Your best, tangos throughout this sonnet tune! Your poetry belongs on center stage! I tip my hat, chuck

Robert Lindley February 19, 2017 at 3:09 PM One truly outstanding sonnet my talented friend! Such heartfelt and glowingly crafted verses are awe inspiring to say the least, IMHO. W Very very well done!!! A10...

Just James February 7, 2017 at 10:58 PM And wonderfully expressed..from the heart is the only way! Well done! super 7 White Wolf February 7, 2017 at 11:01 PM Thank you, James, for your generous comment /|\

Old Buck February 7, 2017 at 1:27 PM When folks comment or wish they could write my response often is: It's as much a curse as a blessing. Often you feel driven to write even if there is nothing you care to share. :o) Thanks for sharing this with all of us on the soup. oldbuck Doug Vinson February 27, 2017 at 1:20 PM Hey Old buck. : ) Glad to see you here. White Wolf is a special guy with many names and much to say. White Wolf February 7, 2017 at 2:25 PM Nice to meet you, Old Buck! I look forward to reading some of your work! Thanks for the comment /|\

Christy Stover February 7, 2017 at 12:55 PM Excellent poem. The best you can do is absolutely exquisite. White Wolf February 7, 2017 at 2:21 PM Thank you, Christy /|\

Nette Onclaud February 7, 2017 at 11:11 AM you surely made my heart beat with gladness, wwolf.... very endearing!..huggs White Wolf February 7, 2017 at 2:20 PM Thank you for your comment, Nette /|\

Janet Keegan James February 7, 2017 at 6:38 AM This is lovely and very romantic ;) I also read "One Must Remain" which was very touching. I too write poems from the heart, although now I am not a young woman looking for love ~ I am a married woman with a heart of Joy, yet I still have a head full of words about how I got here :) Thank you Mr Wolf I enjoy your style x Doug Vinson February 27, 2017 at 1:18 PM "I am a married woman with a heart of Joy, yet I still have a head full of words about how I got here." Janet, that really speaks to me. : ) Great to hear. White Wolf February 7, 2017 at 6:46 AM Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Janet, I'm glad you enjoyed this /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis February 7, 2017 at 5:38 AM Who could ever write a Sonnet better than the heart dear, White Wolf? Good you have left your heart free to palpitate in the rhythm of poetry! Excellent worm my friend! If you wish read "CREATION ONE" I had forgotten I had two poems with the same title. I think is something you would like! In the past I was writing long poems! I have written more than 1400. White Wolf February 7, 2017 at 5:46 AM I shall peruse your catalog now for that one, Demetrios! And thank you for your kind words my friend /|\ 1400 poems hey! It may take me some time then, Haha.

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe February 6, 2017 at 11:24 PM Beautiful write WW - All the best, Mark from SA Mark Paul Van Der Merwe February 7, 2017 at 5:46 AM Absolutely from South Africa - Cape town.Great to meet a fellow South African on this site - Special day for you! Mark van der Merwe White Wolf February 6, 2017 at 11:30 PM Thank you, Mark, I'll take it that SA is South Africa, due to your name! Have a great day my friend /|\

Carol B. February 6, 2017 at 9:42 PM You have a great heart! Enjoyed your poem. White Wolf February 6, 2017 at 9:47 PM Thank you very much, Carol /|\

Sunlite Wanter February 6, 2017 at 6:05 PM Just like you were talking to me. White Wolf February 6, 2017 at 9:46 PM Thank you, Sunlite /|\

Elizabeth Kinch February 6, 2017 at 3:59 PM I love this, beautiful. White Wolf February 6, 2017 at 9:45 PM Why thank you, Elizabeth /|\

Claudia Polydoro February 4, 2017 at 1:25 PM And you've written it beautifully, my friend! Love it :* White Wolf February 6, 2017 at 9:45 PM Thank you, Claudia /|\

John Herlihy February 4, 2017 at 8:04 AM Indeed, I think you have 'had your say" in this charming and delightful poem. I hate to keep mentioning it, but your rhythms seem "like a pro" for want of a better term, like the strict disciplinarian poets of the 19 century before free verse began to run amok. JH White Wolf February 4, 2017 at 12:04 PM Yes, but don't you agree you can be more expressive in free verse! /|\

Heidi Sands February 4, 2017 at 7:51 AM Speaking from the heart is the most genuine and best you can do, as you write so very well. :) White Wolf February 4, 2017 at 12:02 PM Thank you, Heidi, you are too kind /|\

Probir Gupta February 4, 2017 at 7:36 AM Nice sonnet ... Delightful read ... White Wolf February 4, 2017 at 12:00 PM Thank you, Probir, have a great day my friend /|\

Darren White February 4, 2017 at 1:46 AM You're such a wonderful person. One cannot feel anything but friendship and love for you. And your words are wonderful. White Wolf February 4, 2017 at 11:54 AM Thank you, Duir! That means a lot to me! /|\

Daniel Turner February 3, 2017 at 10:06 PM I can never resist a well written sonnet. Nice write, White Wolf:) White Wolf February 3, 2017 at 10:10 PM What a great compliment! Thank you, Daniel /|\

Winged Warrior February 3, 2017 at 10:02 PM Talking straight from the poetic heart...great sonnet Whitey... now I know you are a beautiful soul...god bless...^WW^ White Wolf February 3, 2017 at 10:05 PM It takes one to know one! Haha! Thank you kindly ^WW^ /|\

Arthur Vaso February 3, 2017 at 9:18 PM I enjoyed this, well said! White Wolf February 3, 2017 at 9:24 PM Thank you, Arthur /|\