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Please don't force me to write another word, I speak from thy heart as if it was heard, My pen useless in expressions I find, Though it stems from every part of my mind. How can one shift the unmovable force? While helpless and stranded in this of course, Speaking from my pen from one point of view, Is all that I have to give you a clue. And hoping that my words will shine on through, Giving you a glimpse of what I hold true, In such few words, I will not find a way, But I shall try my best to have my say. A sonnet I have written words to you, Poems from my heart, the best I can do.

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Doug Vinson

Date: 2/27/2017 1:23:00 PM

"I speak from thy heart as if it was heard" - I love this line. Okay, Rick, no forcing you to write another word - you'd be over your syllable limit then ha ha ha. Sincerely, Qagdop the Mercotan. (My real name, as I am an alien.)

White Wolf
Date: 2/28/2017 5:33:00 PM

So, your true identity is finally revealed! Well, I'm actually Izillixinizi from Altair! Aren't these humans a peculiar lot? /|\

Chuck Melugin

Date: 2/22/2017 3:16:00 PM

Wolf, Your best, tangos throughout this sonnet tune! Your poetry belongs on center stage! I tip my hat, chuck

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/19/2017 3:09:00 PM

One truly outstanding sonnet my talented friend! Such heartfelt and glowingly crafted verses are awe inspiring to say the least, IMHO. W Very very well done!!! A10...

Just James

Date: 2/7/2017 10:58:00 PM

And wonderfully expressed..from the heart is the only way! Well done! super 7

White Wolf
Date: 2/7/2017 11:01:00 PM

Thank you, James, for your generous comment /|\

Old Buck

Date: 2/7/2017 1:27:00 PM

When folks comment or wish they could write my response often is: It's as much a curse as a blessing. Often you feel driven to write even if there is nothing you care to share. :o) Thanks for sharing this with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Doug Vinson
Date: 2/27/2017 1:20:00 PM

Hey Old buck. : ) Glad to see you here. White Wolf is a special guy with many names and much to say.

White Wolf
Date: 2/7/2017 2:25:00 PM

Nice to meet you, Old Buck! I look forward to reading some of your work! Thanks for the comment /|\

Christy Stover

Date: 2/7/2017 12:55:00 PM

Excellent poem. The best you can do is absolutely exquisite.

White Wolf
Date: 2/7/2017 2:21:00 PM

Thank you, Christy /|\

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/7/2017 11:11:00 AM

you surely made my heart beat with gladness, wwolf.... very endearing!..huggs

White Wolf
Date: 2/7/2017 2:20:00 PM

Thank you for your comment, Nette /|\

Janet Keegan James

Date: 2/7/2017 6:38:00 AM

This is lovely and very romantic ;) I also read "One Must Remain" which was very touching. I too write poems from the heart, although now I am not a young woman looking for love ~ I am a married woman with a heart of Joy, yet I still have a head full of words about how I got here :) Thank you Mr Wolf I enjoy your style x

Doug Vinson
Date: 2/27/2017 1:18:00 PM

"I am a married woman with a heart of Joy, yet I still have a head full of words about how I got here." Janet, that really speaks to me. : ) Great to hear.

White Wolf
Date: 2/7/2017 6:46:00 AM

Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Janet, I'm glad you enjoyed this /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/7/2017 5:38:00 AM

Who could ever write a Sonnet better than the heart dear, White Wolf? Good you have left your heart free to palpitate in the rhythm of poetry! Excellent worm my friend! If you wish read "CREATION ONE" I had forgotten I had two poems with the same title. I think is something you would like! In the past I was writing long poems! I have written more than 1400.

White Wolf
Date: 2/7/2017 5:46:00 AM

I shall peruse your catalog now for that one, Demetrios! And thank you for your kind words my friend /|\ 1400 poems hey! It may take me some time then, Haha.

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

Date: 2/6/2017 11:24:00 PM

Beautiful write WW - All the best, Mark from SA

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 2/7/2017 5:46:00 AM

Absolutely from South Africa - Cape town.Great to meet a fellow South African on this site - Special day for you! Mark van der Merwe

White Wolf
Date: 2/6/2017 11:30:00 PM

Thank you, Mark, I'll take it that SA is South Africa, due to your name! Have a great day my friend /|\

Carol B.

Date: 2/6/2017 9:42:00 PM

You have a great heart! Enjoyed your poem.

White Wolf
Date: 2/6/2017 9:47:00 PM

Thank you very much, Carol /|\

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 2/6/2017 6:05:00 PM

Just like you were talking to me.

White Wolf
Date: 2/6/2017 9:46:00 PM

Thank you, Sunlite /|\

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 2/6/2017 3:59:00 PM

I love this, beautiful.

White Wolf
Date: 2/6/2017 9:45:00 PM

Why thank you, Elizabeth /|\

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 2/4/2017 1:25:00 PM

And you've written it beautifully, my friend! Love it :*

White Wolf
Date: 2/6/2017 9:45:00 PM

Thank you, Claudia /|\

John Herlihy

Date: 2/4/2017 8:04:00 AM

Indeed, I think you have 'had your say" in this charming and delightful poem. I hate to keep mentioning it, but your rhythms seem "like a pro" for want of a better term, like the strict disciplinarian poets of the 19 century before free verse began to run amok. JH

White Wolf
Date: 2/4/2017 12:04:00 PM

Yes, but don't you agree you can be more expressive in free verse! /|\